for Beyond the Looking Glass7/23/2015 c3 Sara
pls continue the story
pls continue the story
9/13/2014 c1 Bee
You are stealing sally mackenzies books. Stop plagiarizing.
You are stealing sally mackenzies books. Stop plagiarizing.
9/24/2011 c1 Jae
Can you pleaseee continue with the story? :D
Can you pleaseee continue with the story? :D
4/25/2011 c3 Aryll
I really like how the story has turned out so far. I'm wondering whether or not the curse is actually from Ariana, instead of Dianne, in order to somehow protect her from Dianne. I'm also curious of why Dianne would want to bring harm to Auryon's family, but I guess that will be revealed later. :P
There are a couple of mistakes I found: "... as far as she could she ..." and "...father by angry that ..."
My favorite part of this chapter was when Auryon pelted the prince with the apples. XD I really like her personality so far, and I can't wait to see how her character will develop throughout the story. The prince seems like that typical and arrogant royalty type, but I guess that just leaves more room for improvement in the future.
I really like how the story has turned out so far. I'm wondering whether or not the curse is actually from Ariana, instead of Dianne, in order to somehow protect her from Dianne. I'm also curious of why Dianne would want to bring harm to Auryon's family, but I guess that will be revealed later. :P
There are a couple of mistakes I found: "... as far as she could she ..." and "...father by angry that ..."
My favorite part of this chapter was when Auryon pelted the prince with the apples. XD I really like her personality so far, and I can't wait to see how her character will develop throughout the story. The prince seems like that typical and arrogant royalty type, but I guess that just leaves more room for improvement in the future.
11/2/2010 c3 
2Missy Phillips
I really like this story so far, cant wait until you up date it again, i think that the prince will turn out to be an interesting character and am left hoping to find out what Auryon looks like.
2Missy PhillipsI really like this story so far, cant wait until you up date it again, i think that the prince will turn out to be an interesting character and am left hoping to find out what Auryon looks like.
10/27/2010 c3 Jae
I know you're working on the Debutante atm, but I'm curious about this story now. xD Hopefully you'll write more for after you're done with the Debutante. (:
I know you're working on the Debutante atm, but I'm curious about this story now. xD Hopefully you'll write more for after you're done with the Debutante. (:
9/30/2010 c3 4Garneau
Hi,
this is a really interesting storyline. I can't wait to see where you take it. I'm also interested to see how you develop you characters. YOu have done such a great job with The Debutante, I wonder what you will do for Ian and Auryon.
There are a couple of errors with tenses but it is no way bad.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Garneau.
P.S. You're photobucket images for your stories on your profile don't really work (page not found, or something like that). Is it too much to ask it you could fix them? I would love to see what you picture your characters as.
4GarneauHi,
this is a really interesting storyline. I can't wait to see where you take it. I'm also interested to see how you develop you characters. YOu have done such a great job with The Debutante, I wonder what you will do for Ian and Auryon.
There are a couple of errors with tenses but it is no way bad.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Garneau.
P.S. You're photobucket images for your stories on your profile don't really work (page not found, or something like that). Is it too much to ask it you could fix them? I would love to see what you picture your characters as.
5/1/2010 c3 4Searite
lol I felt like hitting that arrogant prince myself, i love the drama surrounding that meeting, i really like auryon at the moment,can't wait to read the next chapter :)
4Searitelol I felt like hitting that arrogant prince myself, i love the drama surrounding that meeting, i really like auryon at the moment,can't wait to read the next chapter :)
5/1/2010 c2 Searite
lol I like the detail in this chapter..it really establishes the world nicely, i like how you describe the wearing off of the magic too
lol I like the detail in this chapter..it really establishes the world nicely, i like how you describe the wearing off of the magic too
5/1/2010 c1 Searite
I love your use of imagery..especially with the blood, flowers and corpse likening, your writing style is strong, really intriguing beginning, will keep on reading :D
I love your use of imagery..especially with the blood, flowers and corpse likening, your writing style is strong, really intriguing beginning, will keep on reading :D
2/28/2010 c3 2worldreminiscence
hoho! すごく興味深い話ですね。(i wonder if i said that right, sorry, i'm not fluent at speaking japanese):[
I can't wait to see what happens next x] yey! i really love this :] kyaa awesome :D hehe is it just me or i sense that the prince has taken an interest on Auryon :] hehe
2worldreminiscencehoho! すごく興味深い話ですね。(i wonder if i said that right, sorry, i'm not fluent at speaking japanese):[
I can't wait to see what happens next x] yey! i really love this :] kyaa awesome :D hehe is it just me or i sense that the prince has taken an interest on Auryon :] hehe
2/28/2010 c2 worldreminiscence
Btw I forgot to ask about this in my review of ur 1st chapter, u just probably mistyped it but, this isn't from Auryon's POV right? so.. here: "The king has come to pay his respects for your late father and has requested an audience." Ariana knocked on the opened door to catch my attention. =When u said: ...opened door to catch my attention. =Maybe, u meant to say "her" instead of "my"? or i'm wrong and that's how it really is? Sorry for asking it, i just got curious =/
Btw I forgot to ask about this in my review of ur 1st chapter, u just probably mistyped it but, this isn't from Auryon's POV right? so.. here: "The king has come to pay his respects for your late father and has requested an audience." Ariana knocked on the opened door to catch my attention. =When u said: ...opened door to catch my attention. =Maybe, u meant to say "her" instead of "my"? or i'm wrong and that's how it really is? Sorry for asking it, i just got curious =/
2/28/2010 c2 worldreminiscence
OMG! (as i said in my last review, i'm gonna be back to read the continuous of this story)x] OH! back to this chapter, OMG really, it is very interesting! I'M so Glad u didn't drop it :[ otherwise, i wasn't able to read it when it's really good T^T And ahh rude prince finally, Finally! the encounter! x]
OMG! (as i said in my last review, i'm gonna be back to read the continuous of this story)x] OH! back to this chapter, OMG really, it is very interesting! I'M so Glad u didn't drop it :[ otherwise, i wasn't able to read it when it's really good T^T And ahh rude prince finally, Finally! the encounter! x]
2/27/2010 c1 worldreminiscence
Oh oh! I noticed in the names, Ariana, Marianne, and Dianne, they all have "an" in names x] i found it cool. And this is a great prologue. Interesting, i wanna read the next chapters but i must sleep now. :[
(p.s. gotta read ur story once i come back from my part-time job today.) :] do u live in Japan too? (also, ur imagination is so wide! really awesome.)
Oh oh! I noticed in the names, Ariana, Marianne, and Dianne, they all have "an" in names x] i found it cool. And this is a great prologue. Interesting, i wanna read the next chapters but i must sleep now. :[
(p.s. gotta read ur story once i come back from my part-time job today.) :] do u live in Japan too? (also, ur imagination is so wide! really awesome.)