
1/26/2010 c2
5ShadowInTheWriter
Yay! I am glad you have decided to continue this story! I really like this story. ;D Update soon!
-ShadowInTheWriter

Yay! I am glad you have decided to continue this story! I really like this story. ;D Update soon!
-ShadowInTheWriter
3/25/2009 c1
5ShadowInTheWriter
I love this story. It's very intresting and I would love to read more.
Update soon :)
-shadowinthewriter

I love this story. It's very intresting and I would love to read more.
Update soon :)
-shadowinthewriter
3/19/2009 c1 Hemii25
oh my. i'm not one for fantasy (unless its ella enchante) this reminds me of ella enchanted so i really like it. the summary is awesome. update soon i really want to know what happens next.
oh my. i'm not one for fantasy (unless its ella enchante) this reminds me of ella enchanted so i really like it. the summary is awesome. update soon i really want to know what happens next.
3/19/2009 c1
1Aurelia Rose
An interesting plot. I would like to see you continue this story.. ;D
FYI: double doors were thrown open (you forgot a period)
I would add more detail to lengthen your paragraphs.. there a bit short. Otherwise... the story is quite good.
- Aurelia Rose

An interesting plot. I would like to see you continue this story.. ;D
FYI: double doors were thrown open (you forgot a period)
I would add more detail to lengthen your paragraphs.. there a bit short. Otherwise... the story is quite good.
- Aurelia Rose