for Two brothers, a sister, and a weekend alone5/31/2009 c1 
13XxBeautifully.BrokenxX
WOW! I really didn't think i would like this kind of story, but i LOVED IT! you should update more! It want to know what happens with Matt noW!
13XxBeautifully.BrokenxXWOW! I really didn't think i would like this kind of story, but i LOVED IT! you should update more! It want to know what happens with Matt noW!
4/23/2009 c1 11buzzgirl37
I worship you...well as long as you don't kill a homeless person 'cus then I'll be a conspiritor to murder or something... :) This was pretty amazing, I've read it like 3 times now so I finally decided I should review.
Scarily good sex scene, I appreciate it entirely since I can't write one and am currently freaking out 'cus I've got one coming up in my story. So I bow to you and your superior porn writing skills (I think porn sounds better than sex...although I guess it could be called erotic instead since there is a kinda story in the background and everything. Anyways, so this amazing (could you tell I thought that :)?)
11buzzgirl37I worship you...well as long as you don't kill a homeless person 'cus then I'll be a conspiritor to murder or something... :) This was pretty amazing, I've read it like 3 times now so I finally decided I should review.
Scarily good sex scene, I appreciate it entirely since I can't write one and am currently freaking out 'cus I've got one coming up in my story. So I bow to you and your superior porn writing skills (I think porn sounds better than sex...although I guess it could be called erotic instead since there is a kinda story in the background and everything. Anyways, so this amazing (could you tell I thought that :)?)
3/30/2009 c1 13FM Radio
Haha I love this: Author's Notes: I own everything. It's because I'm white. That's great! I really like this story. It's going to be awesome when you update. It'll be interesting to see who is on top, Aaron or Matt. I want to point out that in some of your paragraphs you confuse them. Like, at the beginning Aaron is the sixteen year old, but at the end he's the older brother. I'm pretty sure you switched them half way through the story. No offense, but you need to fix that. I could still understand it, but it was unclear and kind of annoying. No offense meant. I really like your stuff, so it's not that. Anyhow, Update soon!
13FM RadioHaha I love this: Author's Notes: I own everything. It's because I'm white. That's great! I really like this story. It's going to be awesome when you update. It'll be interesting to see who is on top, Aaron or Matt. I want to point out that in some of your paragraphs you confuse them. Like, at the beginning Aaron is the sixteen year old, but at the end he's the older brother. I'm pretty sure you switched them half way through the story. No offense, but you need to fix that. I could still understand it, but it was unclear and kind of annoying. No offense meant. I really like your stuff, so it's not that. Anyhow, Update soon!
3/23/2009 c1 Don-Jam
I like how you let us meet Aaron, Matt and Katie 1st, we got to know them. I like them a lot. Your other OC were good too.
I so went to see chapter 2, but a bit of me is thinking that Matt is so young and I do Not went them to do anything to him. Aaron and Katie are older and they both wented it and know what they were doing, But Matt? I do Not know.
I like how you let us meet Aaron, Matt and Katie 1st, we got to know them. I like them a lot. Your other OC were good too.
I so went to see chapter 2, but a bit of me is thinking that Matt is so young and I do Not went them to do anything to him. Aaron and Katie are older and they both wented it and know what they were doing, But Matt? I do Not know.
3/21/2009 c1 5starbance
i liked it, very... idk awkward? but i like awkward stories so it'll be fun to read chapter two lol
5starbancei liked it, very... idk awkward? but i like awkward stories so it'll be fun to read chapter two lol
3/21/2009 c1 ReadingLife
Wow its great. Very well written.
Wow its great. Very well written.
3/21/2009 c1 1AlphaBeatKayGee
wel! that was kinky! i liked it though so hopefully you have a part 2 soon. No i don't feel so bad about the incest..satisfaction is satisfaction! loll
1AlphaBeatKayGeewel! that was kinky! i liked it though so hopefully you have a part 2 soon. No i don't feel so bad about the incest..satisfaction is satisfaction! loll