
7/22/2018 c2 question
do you have writers block did you give up or did you forget pls update i love this and i want to find out what happens next
do you have writers block did you give up or did you forget pls update i love this and i want to find out what happens next
7/16/2018 c2 Brandon
i have not had sex yet but my myself cum with my hands i dont know if my penis is senetive to it but i cum pretty quickly,why is cum white and sticky?
i have not had sex yet but my myself cum with my hands i dont know if my penis is senetive to it but i cum pretty quickly,why is cum white and sticky?
6/20/2018 c2 Brandon
i liked it
you should do more
i liked it
you should do more
5/31/2018 c2 Anonymous
Hey, I know the last time this story was updated was about a year ago, but I'm hoping you'll still see this review. I wanted to let you know this is by far my favorite story. I first read it about 2 years ago and I still haven't found another story that comes even close to this one. The scenario and the way you write it are just outstanding. I was wondering if you still had plans to write chapter 3? I've really been looking forward to it and it would be amazing if you were to write it.
Hey, I know the last time this story was updated was about a year ago, but I'm hoping you'll still see this review. I wanted to let you know this is by far my favorite story. I first read it about 2 years ago and I still haven't found another story that comes even close to this one. The scenario and the way you write it are just outstanding. I was wondering if you still had plans to write chapter 3? I've really been looking forward to it and it would be amazing if you were to write it.
5/22/2018 c2 YagamiLightfan
Why is there no reviews this was amazing thanks for the hard work
Why is there no reviews this was amazing thanks for the hard work
4/28/2018 c2 Brittany
That was fucking fantastic Dude! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. The sex scenes had me on edge, wishing I could get some action right now but my boyfriend is playing Overwatch with his friends. Great job, you have a talent.
That was fucking fantastic Dude! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. The sex scenes had me on edge, wishing I could get some action right now but my boyfriend is playing Overwatch with his friends. Great job, you have a talent.
4/4/2018 c1 Noneya
Hate it
Hate it
3/15/2018 c1 Guest
Oml i love this book tbh. Im weird
Oml i love this book tbh. Im weird
3/10/2018 c1 Anonymous
Maybe add some brother x brother..?
Maybe add some brother x brother..?
2/14/2018 c2 anon
where's chapter 3?
where's chapter 3?
1/3/2018 c2 Anonym
I absolutely LOVED it!
I absolutely LOVED it!
11/20/2017 c2 Guest
Excellent writing, building the climax, ( pardon the pun) in a very artful manner. Well done.
Excellent writing, building the climax, ( pardon the pun) in a very artful manner. Well done.
10/6/2017 c2 Faith
Pls When The Chap 3 Is Out,leme Knw. .Here's My Numb 09064693155
Pls When The Chap 3 Is Out,leme Knw. .Here's My Numb 09064693155
9/13/2017 c2 Anon
I can't take it! I've read this story many times and I need a chapter 3, pleeeease!
I can't take it! I've read this story many times and I need a chapter 3, pleeeease!
8/26/2017 c2 Guest
It was ok a lil wired but I feel like Katie name should have been deanna or Dee lol because I know a girl that has a brother named Arron and I thought some shit was going on there and arron even the way you described him sounded just like him and the things that that Katie said to him while they were having sex but kind of like the things that Deanna said to me while we were having sex and just a little curious now but your real name is not your author name
It was ok a lil wired but I feel like Katie name should have been deanna or Dee lol because I know a girl that has a brother named Arron and I thought some shit was going on there and arron even the way you described him sounded just like him and the things that that Katie said to him while they were having sex but kind of like the things that Deanna said to me while we were having sex and just a little curious now but your real name is not your author name