
3/21/2009 c1
17irenethewriter
I like this a lot! I like how the last line was almost unexpected. Music is such a great thing and I liked how you had it sort of help you/the persona in this poem. Nice job.

I like this a lot! I like how the last line was almost unexpected. Music is such a great thing and I liked how you had it sort of help you/the persona in this poem. Nice job.