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4/25/2009 c1 3Mercyette
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I really liked this piece, the voice especially. Your attitude in the one shot is inspiring, especially toward the very end. It's hard to find stories like this that aren't just angst anymore.

The last two lines are my favorite. They really sum up what you are trying to get across and they are very memorable, too. It gives me strength just reading it.

Nice work!

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