for Stimulation: APHRODISIAC
14/1/2009 c1 ilmiopassato
Uh-oh, here we go again with the mystical perfumes and stuff. ;-) Wonder what's gonna be in store for Jem this time around. Oh, and I totally laughed at Jem's boss. Mine is pretty cool, but she can be really anal about things no one else cares about, haha.
Your writing is much stronger this time around. Keep it up!
Uh-oh, here we go again with the mystical perfumes and stuff. ;-) Wonder what's gonna be in store for Jem this time around. Oh, and I totally laughed at Jem's boss. Mine is pretty cool, but she can be really anal about things no one else cares about, haha.
Your writing is much stronger this time around. Keep it up!
3/26/2009 c1 jenniesmith
Yeah! I am already loving Jem's story! Glad to see this one going!
xoxo
jennie
Yeah! I am already loving Jem's story! Glad to see this one going!
xoxo
jennie
3/25/2009 c1 Elodie Wolfe
So I loved this. Very interesting lead in. The only things I spotted were some grammar inconsistencies and spelling stuff. I love how you're going with Jem's story so far.
Elodie~
So I loved this. Very interesting lead in. The only things I spotted were some grammar inconsistencies and spelling stuff. I love how you're going with Jem's story so far.
Elodie~
3/22/2009 c1 LondonLi
Great start to you new story! I'm looking so forward to this second story in your series.
Great start to you new story! I'm looking so forward to this second story in your series.
3/22/2009 c1 spicesaresweet186
you have caught me with this story already. what ever you have plan for this story go right ahead. please update as soon as possible.
you have caught me with this story already. what ever you have plan for this story go right ahead. please update as soon as possible.