for E L O R I A12/9/2010 c12 
150SpawnMeister666
I like this story so far. My only real gripe is there is no explanation as to WHY Olivia has been chosen to come and save everything in a different world.
Other than that, it is well written, and kept me interested from start to finish. I look forwards to reading the next installment.
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666I like this story so far. My only real gripe is there is no explanation as to WHY Olivia has been chosen to come and save everything in a different world.
Other than that, it is well written, and kept me interested from start to finish. I look forwards to reading the next installment.
Spawny
7/27/2010 c1 5E. A. MacDuff
love this story. although maybe you should change the rating cuz you do swear. I mean I don't care but thats cuz i'm sixteen anyway love the story
5E. A. MacDufflove this story. although maybe you should change the rating cuz you do swear. I mean I don't care but thats cuz i'm sixteen anyway love the story