4/21/2009 c1 Verasque
I'm not much of a poetry expert, but I can appreciate magic with words. What a beautiful and insightful piece. Whether it was your intention or not - I picked up a depiction of journey through the four stanzas that culminated nicely to the final two lines. Great work!

3/24/2009 c1 4Guacamole
Wow, I have to say that poem's pretty deep. Usually I don't read poems here on fictionpress, but i really like yours alot. So anyways, good job on the poem, and please continue to write!