for Reality3/27/2009 c1 
1the meaning of life
Well, you reviewed my poem "What is suffering?" so I found it only fair to read yours; I always do that. Anyway, great poem I really like how you repeated:
"Everything rushed back to reality"
Just that line alone is great and then when you repeat it it makes it even better.
I really liked it, but the flow wasn't that great, but it didn't really matter because the words captured me enough.
1the meaning of lifeWell, you reviewed my poem "What is suffering?" so I found it only fair to read yours; I always do that. Anyway, great poem I really like how you repeated:
"Everything rushed back to reality"
Just that line alone is great and then when you repeat it it makes it even better.
I really liked it, but the flow wasn't that great, but it didn't really matter because the words captured me enough.
3/25/2009 c1 110The Dragon Lover
I love the pattern and repetition in this poem, it makes everything pop and shout at you to look deeper into it. Reality does suck, and I love how this poem explains that. I'd love to live in a world made completely of fantasy...
Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),
~DL ('Dragon Lover')
110The Dragon LoverI love the pattern and repetition in this poem, it makes everything pop and shout at you to look deeper into it. Reality does suck, and I love how this poem explains that. I'd love to live in a world made completely of fantasy...
Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),
~DL ('Dragon Lover')
3/25/2009 c1 13Kitasky123
i really like this. it tells just how hard life is and that even if you can hide it for awhile, reality always comes back. great writing
13Kitasky123i really like this. it tells just how hard life is and that even if you can hide it for awhile, reality always comes back. great writing
3/24/2009 c1 your infection their plague
I like the "Everything rushes back to reality" at the end of each stanza. Very honest, too. I love it. In fact I'm going to favorite it right now.
I like the "Everything rushes back to reality" at the end of each stanza. Very honest, too. I love it. In fact I'm going to favorite it right now.