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3/27/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
I imagined it to be a somg, and it was really good!
3/27/2009 c1 1the meaning of life
Well, you reviewed my poem "What is suffering?" so I found it only fair to read yours; I always do that. Anyway, great poem I really like how you repeated:

"Everything rushed back to reality"

Just that line alone is great and then when you repeat it it makes it even better.

I really liked it, but the flow wasn't that great, but it didn't really matter because the words captured me enough.
3/25/2009 c1 110The Dragon Lover
I love the pattern and repetition in this poem, it makes everything pop and shout at you to look deeper into it. Reality does suck, and I love how this poem explains that. I'd love to live in a world made completely of fantasy...

Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),

~DL ('Dragon Lover')
3/25/2009 c1 13Kitasky123
i really like this. it tells just how hard life is and that even if you can hide it for awhile, reality always comes back. great writing
3/24/2009 c1 your infection their plague
I like the "Everything rushes back to reality" at the end of each stanza. Very honest, too. I love it. In fact I'm going to favorite it right now.

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