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for Somber etc

4/26/2009 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the title. The etc. is interesting and made me want to know what other emotions were in the piece. Also it made me try to label them, which was interesting and hard.

I like the piece. Your formatting is great. You use a lot of different things like italics and ..., but it's not overwhelming at all. It's very subtle. The only thing is it seemed odd that in the second stanza you used none of that.

Your descriptions were really powerful and creative. I especially like those last two lines. Great job!

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