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5/7/2009 c5 God-of-Goats-Loves-Books
This is a wonderfully written chapter :)

i liked your description of Andrew

the story reads well although occasionally it sways into an unrealistic territory with Jenny's melodramatic reaction to Andrew 'cheating' on her

HOWEVER

i like it

i hope you'll keep going

and i'm sorry it took me so long to review :S

Sorry if this sounds like a critical review

but i find these kinds of reviews most helpful for improvement

if not always for morale :S

Looking forward to more

Keep Writing (but don't forget to study :P)

Cat
4/17/2009 c4 12Miss Mysteries
Great storyline so far. i really hope you continue. the story is really interesting and it'd be nice to find out what happens but your choice. If you do continue, i hope you update soon. If not, it was a great story.
3/27/2009 c1 4Jasey Rae
love the descriptions, curious to see what's going to happen next. if you haven't really developed a plot, this could make a neat oneshot if you reworked the ending. just an idea!

so where's my cupcake:)
3/26/2009 c1 1Hotelier15
Please, pretty please, continue! This story is FAB so far! I love the background of the bakery, and I am intrigued! I want to know more about Andrew, and I want to hear about this wedding!

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