for Burning12/23/2009 c1 
4HighOnBrokenWings
Aw.
That was sad
All those descriptions HURT!
That's how amazing it was!
Bravo! You're an amazing writer.
It just all comes and goes, in one ear and out my toes.
It touches everything :)
4HighOnBrokenWingsAw.
That was sad
All those descriptions HURT!
That's how amazing it was!
Bravo! You're an amazing writer.
It just all comes and goes, in one ear and out my toes.
It touches everything :)
4/12/2009 c1 Guest
Interesting. I like poems cuz they're are sort. Its deep and I like it. But I must admit romance is not my thing. (Sure you noticed XD) I had found the first line a little hard to understand. Maybe, "Your touch on my skin or her would make it a tad bit clearer. I wasn't sure if the guy was touching your character or another girl. But all and all, well done.
Interesting. I like poems cuz they're are sort. Its deep and I like it. But I must admit romance is not my thing. (Sure you noticed XD) I had found the first line a little hard to understand. Maybe, "Your touch on my skin or her would make it a tad bit clearer. I wasn't sure if the guy was touching your character or another girl. But all and all, well done.