for A Love Poem for Jason10/4/2012 c1 amanda
i was in love with jason till i found out he was cheating on me with a girl i worked with:{
i was in love with jason till i found out he was cheating on me with a girl i worked with:{
3/28/2009 c1 
17irenethewriter
I thought it was really brilliant how you started off with "I hate you." I totally was not expecting that at all. I think a lot of girls get frustrated when guys don't want to talk about themselves (because generally they don't). It's very sad that they don't want to, though, lol. I loved this line "You say I’m irresponsible, but it’s only that I forget a lot" and the next line about how he should be talking to you and not studying. I can totally relate to thinking that, haha. I liked the entire last stanza and how you had so many things you didn't like and then said that they actually make you love him.. I think it's awesome how you started with "I hate you" and then ended with "I love you." I seriously enjoyed reading this so much! Awesome job.
17irenethewriterI thought it was really brilliant how you started off with "I hate you." I totally was not expecting that at all. I think a lot of girls get frustrated when guys don't want to talk about themselves (because generally they don't). It's very sad that they don't want to, though, lol. I loved this line "You say I’m irresponsible, but it’s only that I forget a lot" and the next line about how he should be talking to you and not studying. I can totally relate to thinking that, haha. I liked the entire last stanza and how you had so many things you didn't like and then said that they actually make you love him.. I think it's awesome how you started with "I hate you" and then ended with "I love you." I seriously enjoyed reading this so much! Awesome job.