7/6/2013 c1 Guest
YAY! You updated! I really love your story and was sooo happy when I received an email saying you updated! Please don't take a long time to update the next chapter! :) And I hope you would feel better!
YAY! You updated! I really love your story and was sooo happy when I received an email saying you updated! Please don't take a long time to update the next chapter! :) And I hope you would feel better!
7/6/2013 c20 ATLove
I got so excited when i got the email saying you updated. I love this story and i hope the next chapter wont be a long wait as this lol :)
I got so excited when i got the email saying you updated. I love this story and i hope the next chapter wont be a long wait as this lol :)
7/6/2013 c20 2Elle for Love to Write
i just recently found this story and I wasn't automatically in love with the concept and your characters. I wasn't sure if it was on a permanent hiatus but I happened to stumble upon it once more and found an additional chapter and I hoped that it wasn't an author note saying it wasn't going to be completed..but it wasn't! I loveee this story, you have an amazing writing talent and I can't wait to read some more! Take your time with the next chapter if you have to but I will definitely be waiting for more!
-Elle
i just recently found this story and I wasn't automatically in love with the concept and your characters. I wasn't sure if it was on a permanent hiatus but I happened to stumble upon it once more and found an additional chapter and I hoped that it wasn't an author note saying it wasn't going to be completed..but it wasn't! I loveee this story, you have an amazing writing talent and I can't wait to read some more! Take your time with the next chapter if you have to but I will definitely be waiting for more!
-Elle
7/6/2013 c20 Guest
Love this story, please update more :)
Love this story, please update more :)
7/6/2013 c20 truebleu
Health issues are a pain. I hope you're feeling way better! Get lots of sleep. I actually enjoy the cliffhangers because I want to guess what happens next. Thanks for not abandoning this story! I love Ben and Olivia!
Health issues are a pain. I hope you're feeling way better! Get lots of sleep. I actually enjoy the cliffhangers because I want to guess what happens next. Thanks for not abandoning this story! I love Ben and Olivia!
7/6/2013 c20 Kat
Sooooo thrilled that this story was updated, has always been one of my favorites. Hope you are feeling better! and thanks for keeping me at the edge of my seat still. Who is that girl that answered the phone?
Sooooo thrilled that this story was updated, has always been one of my favorites. Hope you are feeling better! and thanks for keeping me at the edge of my seat still. Who is that girl that answered the phone?
7/6/2013 c20 reindrops
I've waited for so long for this chapter! You have no idea how thrilled I was when I saw a notification in my inbox. I was smiling (and swooning) while reading the first part of the story. I totally adore Ben and Olivia. I just hope that the woman in Ben's apartment, whoever she is, wouldn't cause so much trouble to the new couple. Anyway, I'm really glad that you didn't abandon this story. I have a friend who is also waiting for an update and I'm just happy that I have good news for her right now. And I hope that the next chapter/s wouldn't take too long to come out.
I've waited for so long for this chapter! You have no idea how thrilled I was when I saw a notification in my inbox. I was smiling (and swooning) while reading the first part of the story. I totally adore Ben and Olivia. I just hope that the woman in Ben's apartment, whoever she is, wouldn't cause so much trouble to the new couple. Anyway, I'm really glad that you didn't abandon this story. I have a friend who is also waiting for an update and I'm just happy that I have good news for her right now. And I hope that the next chapter/s wouldn't take too long to come out.
7/6/2013 c20 Hizuki
I literally squeal out of pure joy when I saw that this story has been updated! Thank you so much! I almost gave up. But I'm so sorry that you've been having health issues. I'm very grateful that you are well enough to write us another chapter. I do hope you recover to full health! (If you haven't already). But gasp, that was cruel...to leave us with another cliffhanger T_T hopefully we won't have to wait long though? ;) but don't rush if you feel sick or anything! We can't lose an amazing author like yourself :)
I'm so glad that Ben said I love you! Hehe and that he has cute nicknames for Livi :) awww! But I wonder who's that woman who picked up his phone...I do hope it's nobody that could potentially damage the beautiful relationship between Ben and Olivia D: I love that pairing!
Well I hope you update soon and you feel better! Keep up the amazing work
I literally squeal out of pure joy when I saw that this story has been updated! Thank you so much! I almost gave up. But I'm so sorry that you've been having health issues. I'm very grateful that you are well enough to write us another chapter. I do hope you recover to full health! (If you haven't already). But gasp, that was cruel...to leave us with another cliffhanger T_T hopefully we won't have to wait long though? ;) but don't rush if you feel sick or anything! We can't lose an amazing author like yourself :)
I'm so glad that Ben said I love you! Hehe and that he has cute nicknames for Livi :) awww! But I wonder who's that woman who picked up his phone...I do hope it's nobody that could potentially damage the beautiful relationship between Ben and Olivia D: I love that pairing!
Well I hope you update soon and you feel better! Keep up the amazing work
7/6/2013 c20 2Just Tacos
I was just sitting at my laptop when I happened to get an update on this story. Imagine my surprise!
Rawr, the evil cliffhanger! Just when Ben and Olivia had the courage to tell each other their feelings, someone decides to wreck that good feeling again. Can't wait to see what's next for them.
I really like the conflict you pose for Harry and Anne. They did fall and marry in a week, and I know they're deep in love, but I'm glad that their relationship has been very real. I think Harry's conflict is something that most adults go through. What happens when your life is drastically changed from how you planned it out. I don't they can't overcome this reality, and I can't wait to see how they work through it!
I was just sitting at my laptop when I happened to get an update on this story. Imagine my surprise!
Rawr, the evil cliffhanger! Just when Ben and Olivia had the courage to tell each other their feelings, someone decides to wreck that good feeling again. Can't wait to see what's next for them.
I really like the conflict you pose for Harry and Anne. They did fall and marry in a week, and I know they're deep in love, but I'm glad that their relationship has been very real. I think Harry's conflict is something that most adults go through. What happens when your life is drastically changed from how you planned it out. I don't they can't overcome this reality, and I can't wait to see how they work through it!
7/6/2013 c20 storybookmoments
I hope you're feeling better! We've missed you and your talented writing skills! Can't wait to see what's next for Ben and Olivia! Here's hoping that Jillian wasn't the one who picked up the phone!
I hope you're feeling better! We've missed you and your talented writing skills! Can't wait to see what's next for Ben and Olivia! Here's hoping that Jillian wasn't the one who picked up the phone!
7/6/2013 c20 clkamp
You updated! I cannot even begin to express how happy I am! Ben and Olivia are one of my favorite couples ever. This just made my day!
You updated! I cannot even begin to express how happy I am! Ben and Olivia are one of my favorite couples ever. This just made my day!
7/6/2013 c20 Need the happy ending
Insert irony: I just checked to see if thus story was updated today.
Insert irony: I just checked to see if thus story was updated today.
5/24/2013 c19 9AKhwab
That's TWO cliffhangers about the SAME night. What are you trying to do? I can't wait to find out what happens next. This story is FAR from done. And honestly speaking, I'm kinda surprised it's longer than Better Together. And now that I'm reading a lot about the other three friends, Jamie & Violet seem kinda cut off :( I hope Olivia & Ben marry & go back to Scotland to live but I don't want the four friends - Violet, Olivia, Toby & Harry - so far apart :(
That's TWO cliffhangers about the SAME night. What are you trying to do? I can't wait to find out what happens next. This story is FAR from done. And honestly speaking, I'm kinda surprised it's longer than Better Together. And now that I'm reading a lot about the other three friends, Jamie & Violet seem kinda cut off :( I hope Olivia & Ben marry & go back to Scotland to live but I don't want the four friends - Violet, Olivia, Toby & Harry - so far apart :(
5/24/2013 c17 AKhwab
Ooooooooooh! I was SO totally NOT expecting that thing at the end. Came to me as a shocker. Good one ;)
Ooooooooooh! I was SO totally NOT expecting that thing at the end. Came to me as a shocker. Good one ;)
5/24/2013 c15 AKhwab
You were plagiarised? :O I didn't know. Was that why you took down some stories like you mentioned in the previous chapter?
You were plagiarised? :O I didn't know. Was that why you took down some stories like you mentioned in the previous chapter?