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5/23/2013 c4 9AKhwab
Woah woman. I hate this Sophia bitch. What's her problem?
5/23/2013 c3 AKhwab
I am surprised that you have a lot of Toby and Harry parts. I wasn't expecting that, especially after reading the nine-chapters-long Better Together. And that's why I'm surprised that this story is more than 15 chapters. This chapter was not so bad.
5/23/2013 c2 AKhwab
The insight on Ben's thoughts is thoroughly appreciated though it felt really detached for some reason as if you couldn't relate to him or something.
5/23/2013 c1 AKhwab
I forgot to write this in the review of Better Together but I was impressed with the research it seemed you had done to include all the quotes and ideas about literature & stuff like that. Now, about this story, a good start. Doesn't sound like the Olivia I read about in the first chapter of Better Together though but I guess this is a different side of her. Nonetheless, a job well done :)
5/16/2013 c19 Rachel
Hi, so I've been waiting a long time for you to update and I know your busy and maybe you don't want to write anymore because of all these crazy people plagiarizing you but if there's anyway I can maybe buy the story? Like can you post somewhere we the readers can I buy because all ur stories are amazing and should've been published like years ago.. Anyways please let us know! :)
3/26/2013 c19 6Carmel March
This is really an incredible story. Your characters are so well-developed and likable, your writing is amazing, and the development of the relationships is just addicting and I can't get enough. I know it's been over a year that you've updated, but I hope you're still writing because you've got a ton of talent. I hope to see an update for this sometime :)
3/19/2013 c19 1darkXxXflames
PLEASE UPDATE! *puppy eyes*
3/15/2013 c19 1WheelieGirl3
That was amazing. I love the transition from dislike to friends to like and finally to love. It was amazing. Was chapter 19 the last chapter?
3/3/2013 c19 zaini
please update this one !
its been far too long !
you've started off with new stories, which by the way are classic,but PLEASE !
its been really awfully long.
and we miss Ben and Livi.
2/22/2013 c5 Guest
Harry Potter? LOL, this reminds of HP. Three best friends, harry, olivia and toby...and bendraco malfoy...
2/21/2013 c19 32The Siege
Okay, please please please please PLEASE update, templeton21! I'm begging you! I'm on my knees (not literally, because I'm sitting at the computer, typing, obviously but you know what I mean)! I kowtow to you! PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! It's too amazing to leave unfinished! Ben and Olivia are too perfect together to leave unfinished! I WON'T EVEN POINT OUT YOUR MINOR VERB TENSE ERRORS BECAUSE I JUST REALLY WANT YOU TO UPDATE! DDDDDDDDDDDD:
Sorry, that was really demanding. What I mean to say is, please continue and finish this story because you have so many anxious and hopeful readers and do you really want to let us all down? Hmmm? LOL okay no just please update. Please times infinity. I haven't begged anyone like this ever in my entire life, so that means I must be really serious and your story and writing must be seriously good and and and and and I really hope you read this and feel my-no, our collective pain ("our" referring to all of us readers, BTW). Because I honestly, honestly, honestly want to read the rest of this.
Thank you for writing such an amazing story and sharing it here on FP! :D
2/16/2013 c19 Ayine
I love Ben :p
Please write more, I want to know how this ends!
2/8/2013 c19 Derpina96
uggghh you cock-block aside from that i love the story thank you still a bit unfinished ... but i can live with that!
2/2/2013 c5 13JDFly
I see U already have a ton of reviews so I'll just toss 1 more on the pile. Pretty good writing. U made me feel sad for Olivia & made me laugh at Ben's financial problems & his unfamilarity with a credit card statement - poor guy.
12/27/2012 c19 AbbeyXD
Oh. My. God. Major cliff hanger! You better update soon :P seriously! I can't wait :)
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