8/5/2012 c19 2Lonelystarr77
I LOVED this story..is it completed? I hope not..I would love for more. You're so talented! It's amazing. I love all of your stories.
I LOVED this story..is it completed? I hope not..I would love for more. You're so talented! It's amazing. I love all of your stories.
8/4/2012 c19 Coryna
Love your writing style! The relationship between Ben and Olivia is so mature and their chemistry really shows through your writing. Please say if you plan on ever updating again?! I don't think I can handle the constant anticipation of whether or not I should be expecting another chapter. But I really do hope that you'll continue with this story (:
Love your writing style! The relationship between Ben and Olivia is so mature and their chemistry really shows through your writing. Please say if you plan on ever updating again?! I don't think I can handle the constant anticipation of whether or not I should be expecting another chapter. But I really do hope that you'll continue with this story (:
8/2/2012 c19 Ryonee
You are so talented! I love all of your characters! They seems so real. and i love how you developed chemistry between ben & olivia. Ack i love it!
You are so talented! I love all of your characters! They seems so real. and i love how you developed chemistry between ben & olivia. Ack i love it!
8/1/2012 c19 Chelsea
Hey I an a huge fan of this story :) seriously such an amamazing writer and I've was hoping to see an update soon ha this story and another one like a house on fire I constantly check for updates ha. Feel proud x hopefully read from you soon :)
Hey I an a huge fan of this story :) seriously such an amamazing writer and I've was hoping to see an update soon ha this story and another one like a house on fire I constantly check for updates ha. Feel proud x hopefully read from you soon :)
8/1/2012 c19 Chelsea
Hey :) I kn
Hey :) I kn
7/23/2012 c19 1sunset daughter
Thank you for this story!
This story has made me feel so passionate for reading again, the way I used to a couple of years ago - staying up as late as possible to finish the next chapter or story.
I love your characters and the joy I have found in reading about the their adventures are priceless.
I am eagerly awaiting the next beautiful chapter(s) of this wonderful story! I really want to know how Ben and Olivia are going to end up!
Thank you for this story!
This story has made me feel so passionate for reading again, the way I used to a couple of years ago - staying up as late as possible to finish the next chapter or story.
I love your characters and the joy I have found in reading about the their adventures are priceless.
I am eagerly awaiting the next beautiful chapter(s) of this wonderful story! I really want to know how Ben and Olivia are going to end up!
7/23/2012 c19 Meow
PLEASEEEEE UPDATE cmon a lot of ppl, including me, LOVE this story! Please dont be cruel by letting us wait for this story to update as it has been a few months already. You wouldnt be that cruel now, would you?;)
PLEASEEEEE UPDATE cmon a lot of ppl, including me, LOVE this story! Please dont be cruel by letting us wait for this story to update as it has been a few months already. You wouldnt be that cruel now, would you?;)
7/19/2012 c19 melanie9354
Please finish thier story! I need more of Ben & Olivia just when they are about to get intimate it ends. There is so much more to tell and I want to see more, Scottish wedding, passion, romance and babies!
Please finish thier story! I need more of Ben & Olivia just when they are about to get intimate it ends. There is so much more to tell and I want to see more, Scottish wedding, passion, romance and babies!
7/8/2012 c4 D. M. Gotmen
Uggggh. I'm not liking Sophia at ALL. Ugggghhhh. She's not prettier than Olivia. No. I won'y have it...
Lol sorry for that. It's just... Never mind... Love your story in spite of Sophia... Hahaha
Uggggh. I'm not liking Sophia at ALL. Ugggghhhh. She's not prettier than Olivia. No. I won'y have it...
Lol sorry for that. It's just... Never mind... Love your story in spite of Sophia... Hahaha
7/6/2012 c1 1I caught myself
This sounds extremely good so far. Thanks for sharing this...its amazing!
Brookie xx
This sounds extremely good so far. Thanks for sharing this...its amazing!
Brookie xx
7/5/2012 c7 Guest
LMFAO! omg pig orgasm. i had to keep quiet so no one ould hear me. gotta tell my friends about this website and awesome story! :D ••• im bored :P
LMFAO! omg pig orgasm. i had to keep quiet so no one ould hear me. gotta tell my friends about this website and awesome story! :D ••• im bored :P
7/3/2012 c19 Guest
YES! They actually resolved the fight like normal people. No jumping to conclusions and what not. Whoooo, that feels good to read! Anyways, can't wait till the next chapter!
YES! They actually resolved the fight like normal people. No jumping to conclusions and what not. Whoooo, that feels good to read! Anyways, can't wait till the next chapter!
6/21/2012 c19 Tia t
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!