
11/19/2017 c5 Rckyfrk
God. Toby made his announcement and I broke into tears. I'm, like...emotionally invested in this now. What have you done?!
God. Toby made his announcement and I broke into tears. I'm, like...emotionally invested in this now. What have you done?!
11/19/2017 c4 Rckyfrk
Wow! So, Sophia is horrible. Love seeing Ben realize he brings more passion out of her than her own sister, though it breaks my heart to see Olivia behave that way, as if she's been beaten into submission by her sister, and by extension her family.
And what the crap with Toby?!
Wow! So, Sophia is horrible. Love seeing Ben realize he brings more passion out of her than her own sister, though it breaks my heart to see Olivia behave that way, as if she's been beaten into submission by her sister, and by extension her family.
And what the crap with Toby?!
11/19/2017 c3 Rckyfrk
I like watching Olivia's guard come down, one link in her armor at a time.
I like watching Olivia's guard come down, one link in her armor at a time.
11/18/2017 c2 Rckyfrk
Oh my goodness I love this!
Oh my goodness I love this!
11/17/2017 c1 Rckyfrk
See? Again. Sucked in. Though this time I know it's because I want to 1) know why they hate each other so much and 2) watch them fall in love despite themselves.
See? Again. Sucked in. Though this time I know it's because I want to 1) know why they hate each other so much and 2) watch them fall in love despite themselves.
11/2/2017 c22
10Emoddess
Jamie and Violet's story was wonderful but so is Ben and Olivia's! Gosh I'm really excited for this and I really love these pairs together. I love how you write them in their point of view, also not forgetting to tell the story in their friend's lives too. It makes the connection closer and it definitely shows how they all have this longtime bond together as friends. I feel attached to not only Ben and Olivia, but Harry and Anne's as well. Not really a fan of Toby but I get where he is coming from, though. I also love that Jamie and Violet are still in their lives, especially the visit made to the England at their humble abode. There's barely anything that I dislike in this story and I think you did an excellent job in bringing the characters to life with their problems and surroundings. Speaking of that, Scotland has always been one of the places that I have a fascination with and I really admire the way you describe the place, making it easier to visualize the scenes. Do keep it up the wonderful work and I'm looking forward to read the next chapter~ :'D

Jamie and Violet's story was wonderful but so is Ben and Olivia's! Gosh I'm really excited for this and I really love these pairs together. I love how you write them in their point of view, also not forgetting to tell the story in their friend's lives too. It makes the connection closer and it definitely shows how they all have this longtime bond together as friends. I feel attached to not only Ben and Olivia, but Harry and Anne's as well. Not really a fan of Toby but I get where he is coming from, though. I also love that Jamie and Violet are still in their lives, especially the visit made to the England at their humble abode. There's barely anything that I dislike in this story and I think you did an excellent job in bringing the characters to life with their problems and surroundings. Speaking of that, Scotland has always been one of the places that I have a fascination with and I really admire the way you describe the place, making it easier to visualize the scenes. Do keep it up the wonderful work and I'm looking forward to read the next chapter~ :'D
9/20/2017 c1 Guest
i really wish you'd finish this story. pretty please.. been waiting for this..
im happy that you' re writing a new story by the way :)
i really wish you'd finish this story. pretty please.. been waiting for this..
im happy that you' re writing a new story by the way :)
8/31/2017 c22
1novsei
wHY ARE THERE SO MANY UNFISNISHED BOOKS UNDER YOUR USERNAME LMAO YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE M8
I WANT TO SEE THEM GET MARRIED AND HAVE BABIES BEFORE FINISHING THIS BOOK BUT THEN I SEE IT WAS LAST UPDATED IN 2012 AND ITS 2017 AJDHWJFJWE
i'm sorry. it's just one of my favourite books isn't completed and i'm just here bawling

wHY ARE THERE SO MANY UNFISNISHED BOOKS UNDER YOUR USERNAME LMAO YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE M8
I WANT TO SEE THEM GET MARRIED AND HAVE BABIES BEFORE FINISHING THIS BOOK BUT THEN I SEE IT WAS LAST UPDATED IN 2012 AND ITS 2017 AJDHWJFJWE
i'm sorry. it's just one of my favourite books isn't completed and i'm just here bawling
7/22/2017 c22 TheImpossibleGirl93
For nearly three years, I've been wishing for an update on this... I miss it.
For nearly three years, I've been wishing for an update on this... I miss it.
10/19/2016 c22 Ellie
I wish you could finish this
I wish you could finish this
8/19/2016 c22 Guest
Omg update this. PLEASE. ITS BEEN 2 YEARS
Omg update this. PLEASE. ITS BEEN 2 YEARS