5/27/2015 c22 3ColdWinter12
OMG! I love this story so far and how the relationship between Olivia and Ben. I like how you switch between characters, so they are all so lovable and you care for this group of friends. I'm excited to read more and to eventually read Olivia and Ben's happy ending. Please update soon!

3/16/2015 c19 2Bandgeekclarinet14
It's been seven months, those Brussels sprouts must be charred at this point.

No saving them.

But seriously though, you leave us with a cliffy like that, they are FINALLY going to pork, and you leave it. No update in seven month. I have been in fangirl limbo for seven months.

Please put a poor girl out of her misery. Please, I beg of you.

Do it for the brussels sprouts.

Haha, but honestly, this is, and has been, one of my favorite FP stories for five years now. It is so original, and the characters are just so well developed, not just the two protagonists, and I love that.

I also love the witty one liners being thrown around. They get me every time.

I also hate it when people try to tell authors what should happen in their story, because I think it's slightly rude, but I can't help but picture a cute little scene of maybe Liv and Ben trying to help Harry get back into the good graces of his wife by planning an "I'm an idiot forgive me" date and them taking the kids for the night, and then we can see them being pseudo parents and playing house and ah, so cute. Of course this is all in my mind. I have to make up these little scenarios since someone *hint hint* hasn't given us any more chapters to read over and over again.

So please, if you have the time, and I pray to the lord almighty that you do, please, please give us an update.

I can't wait to see what you have planned.

Best Wishes,
XXX
Kenz

2/5/2015 c22 2Bandgeekclarinet14
Okay, I am literally dying here. You can't just stop a story right when they are about to FRICK FACK, LIKE COME ON.

Ugh.

This story has literally been my little getaway from my stressful life. I have found myself rereading this more times than I can count.

You have such a way with words and the plot line is just too perfect. I love everything. The Characters, the banter, the small gestures.

I need more ASAP.

I really hope you are doing well and have some time to continue writing.

Amazing job as always.

1/5/2015 c22 KarasunoFan
Oh my!
I just found this story today and am so invested I ordered take out rather than stop reading! And much to my dismay I find it ends here :o.
Hope to see Chap 23 ASAP

1/5/2015 c22 6Alexa Rg
Their Brussels Sprouts might be ice cold by now.

11/25/2014 c22 Guest
Pleaasseee complete this story

10/6/2014 c8 Cassadaga
I really love this! But Ben shouldn't be saying "mom"-British people say "mum" and they consider it to be a sort of patriotic thing. They would never say mom. That's like calling football soccer-it goes against national identity lol

Also it was weird to say that his home is "between Edinburgh and Inverness" because those two cities are pretty far apart. There are other large cities between them like St Andrews, Dundee, Aberdeen. It just wasn't a natural thing to say because Edinburgh and Inverness are ao far apart. (I lived in Edinburgh so that's why I'm commenting on this. I don't expect everyone to know the distances so it's no big deal, but I thought you might like to know :) )

I like the flaws the characters have and the way this is written. At first I thought this was all set in the UK somewhere because of the names and way they spoke. Dunno. But you do a good job of making Brits sound British. And omg is Harry's name Harry Potter? Haha awesome. Also, I did enjoy the different and unexpected POVs, such as Harry's.

My fictionpress name is Cassadaga but I'm on my phone and it's a hassle to sign in. I will leave more reviews as I read on!

10/2/2014 c22 Sam
Do you always take this long to update? It's a good story but I don't want to get further invested in this story if I have to wait two months between updates