for More Than Anyone8/27/2014 c22 Tlangi
Yey! I love this chapter! :)
Yey! I love this chapter! :)
8/11/2014 c1 marta.ador
Hi! Your story has been added to the Hate/Love category on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review:
Out of every single cliché possible, Hate/Love is the most difficult to write. How can someone go from extreme hatred to extreme love, and be realistic while doing so? It seems to be an impossible task, but apparently not for templeton21. Her story "More Than Anyone" is written with such freshness and clarity that it's obvious to see she's definitely written her cliché very well.
Ben and Olivia, the two main characters, do truly hate each other, but it's not an unrealistic, unfounded hatred, nor is it exaggerated. They're also mature, confronting their feelings when necessary and confessing if needed. Their two POVs make us feel for them, instead of detracting from the story.
I also have to mention the beautiful background of vivid and memorable side characters; without them the story wouldn’t be as funny and original as it is. Luckily, templeton21 had the foresight to include them, and she is definitely reaping results.
Hi! Your story has been added to the Hate/Love category on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review:
Out of every single cliché possible, Hate/Love is the most difficult to write. How can someone go from extreme hatred to extreme love, and be realistic while doing so? It seems to be an impossible task, but apparently not for templeton21. Her story "More Than Anyone" is written with such freshness and clarity that it's obvious to see she's definitely written her cliché very well.
Ben and Olivia, the two main characters, do truly hate each other, but it's not an unrealistic, unfounded hatred, nor is it exaggerated. They're also mature, confronting their feelings when necessary and confessing if needed. Their two POVs make us feel for them, instead of detracting from the story.
I also have to mention the beautiful background of vivid and memorable side characters; without them the story wouldn’t be as funny and original as it is. Luckily, templeton21 had the foresight to include them, and she is definitely reaping results.
7/29/2014 c21 sappyromancelvr
Absolutely phenomenal story! Hope you come back and finish it some time :)
Absolutely phenomenal story! Hope you come back and finish it some time :)
7/29/2014 c21 hunter005
WHY HASNT THIS STORY BEEN FINISHED!? Oh my gosh, I absolutely love it! I'm really impressed with the way you developed the characters. Olivia and Ben were mature and dealt with their problems. I really appreciated how any problem they had never escalated into any intense drama or pettiness. They are just so perfect for each other. You made Olivia so classy. I was ecstatic to learn that she is a virgin... It makes her so much more lovable. And the fact that Ben wanted to earn her - now that wooed me! Haha. And I have to say, Harry and Anne are so stinking cute! They are an adorable couple and I'm so happy that you expanded on their relationship throughout the story.
All in all, this is some great writing and an amazing storyline! Please, please, PLEASE update! I absolutely need to know what happens further between Ben and Olivia :))
WHY HASNT THIS STORY BEEN FINISHED!? Oh my gosh, I absolutely love it! I'm really impressed with the way you developed the characters. Olivia and Ben were mature and dealt with their problems. I really appreciated how any problem they had never escalated into any intense drama or pettiness. They are just so perfect for each other. You made Olivia so classy. I was ecstatic to learn that she is a virgin... It makes her so much more lovable. And the fact that Ben wanted to earn her - now that wooed me! Haha. And I have to say, Harry and Anne are so stinking cute! They are an adorable couple and I'm so happy that you expanded on their relationship throughout the story.
All in all, this is some great writing and an amazing storyline! Please, please, PLEASE update! I absolutely need to know what happens further between Ben and Olivia :))
7/18/2014 c21 Tlangi
Are you ever going to continue this story? Or have you started posting it on another site?
Are you ever going to continue this story? Or have you started posting it on another site?
7/6/2014 c21 Smile
This is freaking awesome! I love this story, please write more!
PS- Trader Joe's is my store! SAMPLES!
This is freaking awesome! I love this story, please write more!
PS- Trader Joe's is my store! SAMPLES!
66/6/2014 c21 ipodshufflen
Please update!
Please update!
5/29/2014 c21 Suzy
Hi, I keep checking back to see if you've posted a new chapter even though it's been a while. Do you have plans to continue with this story? Please say yes! Thanks!
Hi, I keep checking back to see if you've posted a new chapter even though it's been a while. Do you have plans to continue with this story? Please say yes! Thanks!
5/14/2014 c21 Guest
This is so cute! Please write more!
This is so cute! Please write more!
5/8/2014 c21 Guest
This story was perfect and I'm really upset because you never got to finish it. I hope you read my review (and all the others) and realize how much people love your story.
This story was perfect and I'm really upset because you never got to finish it. I hope you read my review (and all the others) and realize how much people love your story.
4/1/2014 c21 Lake Effect
You're going to update this, right?! YOU HAVE TO! I just spent days reading this in between all my schoolwork and sleeping (sadly, both compulsory activities) and I seriously can't get enough. I love Ben and Olivia too much for words.
Please update soon!
You're going to update this, right?! YOU HAVE TO! I just spent days reading this in between all my schoolwork and sleeping (sadly, both compulsory activities) and I seriously can't get enough. I love Ben and Olivia too much for words.
Please update soon!
3/23/2014 c21 theslykit
honestly i think this is one of my favourite stories written by you...and you've written so many good ones! i like this story even more than violet and jamie's story! D:
honestly i think this is one of my favourite stories written by you...and you've written so many good ones! i like this story even more than violet and jamie's story! D: