for Synthetic Life9/22/2015 c1 will
Holy fuck that was sad but beautifully written if you ever read this I think you should publish it. The way it's written is so great.
Holy fuck that was sad but beautifully written if you ever read this I think you should publish it. The way it's written is so great.
9/22/2012 c1 
8Justine Selene
What a beautiful story! Loved the description and the realism of your characters. The ending was sad but lovely. A great read :)
8Justine SeleneWhat a beautiful story! Loved the description and the realism of your characters. The ending was sad but lovely. A great read :)
12/7/2011 c1 2LunarFelis
What a wonderful story. Your style is descriptive, graphic and flows so well I could 'see' the characters. Gabriel was well-constructed (sorry :P) and Sydney was likeable and realistic. I'm sorry, but after that ending, I really hate Adam and Carrie - however, you got their prejudice and lack of understanding perfectly. I wish it ended differently, but I'm glad Gabriel and Sydney will be together again some day :)
2LunarFelisWhat a wonderful story. Your style is descriptive, graphic and flows so well I could 'see' the characters. Gabriel was well-constructed (sorry :P) and Sydney was likeable and realistic. I'm sorry, but after that ending, I really hate Adam and Carrie - however, you got their prejudice and lack of understanding perfectly. I wish it ended differently, but I'm glad Gabriel and Sydney will be together again some day :)
2/5/2011 c1 6sharon-cooley
Damn, you're good. I stumbled upon this and thought, this could be interesting. I read it and fell in love. Gabe and Sydeney seem wonderful together; anyone even thinking about messing them up are complete douchebags. I cried over this, and I almost never cry over stories. Good, PHENOMENAL job.
Sharon
6sharon-cooleyDamn, you're good. I stumbled upon this and thought, this could be interesting. I read it and fell in love. Gabe and Sydeney seem wonderful together; anyone even thinking about messing them up are complete douchebags. I cried over this, and I almost never cry over stories. Good, PHENOMENAL job.
Sharon
5/12/2010 c1 1Jessie Wulf
Oh God, this story was so touching. It made my eyes tear up. I hope you make more stories like this. It was wonderful.
1Jessie WulfOh God, this story was so touching. It made my eyes tear up. I hope you make more stories like this. It was wonderful.
8/24/2009 c1 Jessiva
I want to kill Adam and Carrie! Evil little buggers just couldn't leave well enough alone, could they? I really enjoyed this story though, and it did get me to shed a few tears, which is really unusual...I just felt so bad for Gabe and Sydney I guess. Well done, overall. I look forward to more work from you :)
I want to kill Adam and Carrie! Evil little buggers just couldn't leave well enough alone, could they? I really enjoyed this story though, and it did get me to shed a few tears, which is really unusual...I just felt so bad for Gabe and Sydney I guess. Well done, overall. I look forward to more work from you :)
4/26/2009 c1 4Lady Katreina
my tears aren't silver, but they're certainly saline.
Oh my gosh.
Oh, wow, thank you. Synthetic Life is a very, very good story. Incredibly good.
Wow. heh, My cheeks are awash. (sniffles)
4Lady Katreinamy tears aren't silver, but they're certainly saline.
Oh my gosh.
Oh, wow, thank you. Synthetic Life is a very, very good story. Incredibly good.
Wow. heh, My cheeks are awash. (sniffles)
4/13/2009 c1 11Joe Skittles
A really great story! You literally have me balling right now. You made Sydney and Gabe come alive for me (it helps that Gabe is a favorite name of mine! lol!). One thing I would have liked to see is a little more personality in the other characters. Overall...well done, well done!
11Joe SkittlesA really great story! You literally have me balling right now. You made Sydney and Gabe come alive for me (it helps that Gabe is a favorite name of mine! lol!). One thing I would have liked to see is a little more personality in the other characters. Overall...well done, well done!
4/1/2009 c1 lilkorea
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it was well thought out and writen, though there were a few gramatical errors, it was still a great story. It made me feel empathetic with Sydney and Gabe, please, continue writing wonderful stories like this.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it was well thought out and writen, though there were a few gramatical errors, it was still a great story. It made me feel empathetic with Sydney and Gabe, please, continue writing wonderful stories like this.
3/30/2009 c1 6anita darling
I have to say, wow.
The ending was really sad though, I don't think that it was right that he was deactivated that way. But that's okay.
I cried at the end. It was really good.
I loved it.
6anita darlingI have to say, wow.
The ending was really sad though, I don't think that it was right that he was deactivated that way. But that's okay.
I cried at the end. It was really good.
I loved it.
3/29/2009 c1 Mayuka
This story was very good. It was kind of weird in the obvious way, because Gabe wasn't human and technically shouldn't have been able to feel emotions. But it was still touching, and it makes one think about the impact technology has on us in this day and age. It was well-written, too. Overall, I liked it!
This story was very good. It was kind of weird in the obvious way, because Gabe wasn't human and technically shouldn't have been able to feel emotions. But it was still touching, and it makes one think about the impact technology has on us in this day and age. It was well-written, too. Overall, I liked it!
3/29/2009 c1 SoundOfMind
This is extremely well structured and written, however the ending felt a bit desensitized.
Love it, keep it up
This is extremely well structured and written, however the ending felt a bit desensitized.
Love it, keep it up
3/28/2009 c1 EdwardISLestat
Thank you for this wonderful love story. I thoroughly enjoyed how you kept the difficulties of a robot and human intact; he didn’t suddenly wake up with the ability to feel and yet they both worked through that. I’m sad that he was deactivated but its better than having him live on forever after her. Five stars and I love your writing style by the way.
Thank you for this wonderful love story. I thoroughly enjoyed how you kept the difficulties of a robot and human intact; he didn’t suddenly wake up with the ability to feel and yet they both worked through that. I’m sad that he was deactivated but its better than having him live on forever after her. Five stars and I love your writing style by the way.