for Hero by Design10/15/2016 c5 Guest
Love your story so much I'm late for a date so I can read it :)
Love your story so much I'm late for a date so I can read it :)
1/29/2015 c29 Alondra
I really like your story, but to me it was like she betrayed her love for Jordan in this chapter by getting cozy with, and kissing "some other guy"; I mean same goes for him in a way but maybe he just gave up on Amy after finding out about his dad and her mom? I really like the story though, please don't take it personally, just me and my stupid opinion.
I really like your story, but to me it was like she betrayed her love for Jordan in this chapter by getting cozy with, and kissing "some other guy"; I mean same goes for him in a way but maybe he just gave up on Amy after finding out about his dad and her mom? I really like the story though, please don't take it personally, just me and my stupid opinion.
2/14/2012 c2 
62Tathwem Essenuejal
Way to be clueless Megan. Interesting terms of endearment... I'll stick with mon petit chou (a french term of endearment literally translating to, "my little cabbage"). Leonardo, definitely Italian. It's kind of strange, the short hand Leo brings out the force and strength of the football player in him but his full name shows the sophistication of the Italian arts and his work ethic as part of the race of one of the greatest empires the world had ever seen. That's probably too in depth but whatever. He seems to prefer the Leo side of him (I will now differentiate between his qualities as Leo and Leonardo) but there is definitely some Leonardo in that boy. And Tony... Not sure what to think of him yet.
62Tathwem EssenuejalWay to be clueless Megan. Interesting terms of endearment... I'll stick with mon petit chou (a french term of endearment literally translating to, "my little cabbage"). Leonardo, definitely Italian. It's kind of strange, the short hand Leo brings out the force and strength of the football player in him but his full name shows the sophistication of the Italian arts and his work ethic as part of the race of one of the greatest empires the world had ever seen. That's probably too in depth but whatever. He seems to prefer the Leo side of him (I will now differentiate between his qualities as Leo and Leonardo) but there is definitely some Leonardo in that boy. And Tony... Not sure what to think of him yet.
2/14/2012 c1 Tathwem Essenuejal
The beginning of your novel writing career. And now I get the significance of the title. I must say, I am now going to be totally addicted to a romance novel all thanks to Ruby Kart. I really should have read it well before. Anyway, I love the character you have going with Amy. A third wheel fashion designer; I dig it. Modesty, filled with humor, brilliant first chapter. You don't reveal too much which works to your advantage at keeping the reader curious. Between her friends and her late father... and admittedly the romance, I expect to be entertained.
The beginning of your novel writing career. And now I get the significance of the title. I must say, I am now going to be totally addicted to a romance novel all thanks to Ruby Kart. I really should have read it well before. Anyway, I love the character you have going with Amy. A third wheel fashion designer; I dig it. Modesty, filled with humor, brilliant first chapter. You don't reveal too much which works to your advantage at keeping the reader curious. Between her friends and her late father... and admittedly the romance, I expect to be entertained.
10/31/2011 c40 2The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper
what does Amy mean about 'i wiped a way a few more tears'? I had to get rid of a puddle. :'( I was soo sad
2The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paperwhat does Amy mean about 'i wiped a way a few more tears'? I had to get rid of a puddle. :'( I was soo sad
8/27/2011 c50 4chynna323
Amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing! I could keep going, but i won't cause i wouldn't have enough characters. I'm extremely happy with the ending... so happy that happy isn't good enough to explain it. Nor it is ecstatic or thrilled or... you get the idea. I have already favorited this story, and plan on reading many more of them. ! (p.s. I am extremely tired so if this sounds crazy, don't blame me, but don't get me wrong I still am in love with the story)
4chynna323Amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing! I could keep going, but i won't cause i wouldn't have enough characters. I'm extremely happy with the ending... so happy that happy isn't good enough to explain it. Nor it is ecstatic or thrilled or... you get the idea. I have already favorited this story, and plan on reading many more of them. ! (p.s. I am extremely tired so if this sounds crazy, don't blame me, but don't get me wrong I still am in love with the story)
8/27/2011 c49 chynna323
Ack! it is almost over! i have become addicted to this story, and now it is almost gone. (tear tear) Well kudos for keeping me interested this long, and for all the smiles, laughs, giggles, the sniffles, the tears, the amazingly lovable characters and the connections to them. A thousand hugs and cookies to you!
Ack! it is almost over! i have become addicted to this story, and now it is almost gone. (tear tear) Well kudos for keeping me interested this long, and for all the smiles, laughs, giggles, the sniffles, the tears, the amazingly lovable characters and the connections to them. A thousand hugs and cookies to you!
8/26/2011 c33 chynna323
Yay! She isn't dead.
P.s I just noticed that all of my comment sound very crazy with lots of !'s, i'm tired, so I get overly emotional...but the tears were not me over reacting
Yay! She isn't dead.
P.s I just noticed that all of my comment sound very crazy with lots of !'s, i'm tired, so I get overly emotional...but the tears were not me over reacting
8/26/2011 c32 chynna323
I am scared to read the next chpt.
What if her mother died?
What if Jordan's dad was in the car? (not highly likely)
What if my what if list goes on forever? (lol)
I am scared to read the next chpt.
What if her mother died?
What if Jordan's dad was in the car? (not highly likely)
What if my what if list goes on forever? (lol)
8/26/2011 c29 chynna323
I am crying now. I am hopeless when it comes to things like this. keep writing, you are truly amazing
I am crying now. I am hopeless when it comes to things like this. keep writing, you are truly amazing
8/26/2011 c28 chynna323
Omg I should have said this before, but this would make an amazing movie. Love this story
Omg I should have said this before, but this would make an amazing movie. Love this story
8/26/2011 c19 chynna323
EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! This story is sssssooooooo awesome.
I am in love with all of your characters.
EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! This story is sssssooooooo awesome.
I am in love with all of your characters.
6/5/2011 c1 2The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper
yeea.. i noe im reviewing the first chapter. but i only did it to add you and this story to my favourites. ive read it 2 times.I absolutwly love it.
2The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paperyeea.. i noe im reviewing the first chapter. but i only did it to add you and this story to my favourites. ive read it 2 times.I absolutwly love it.
4/28/2011 c14 The.Girl.With.Pen.and.Paper
LOLi love the gay thingy i cracked up! AND ITS MY SECOND TIME READING YOUR STORY!lol i really think max is hot
LOLi love the gay thingy i cracked up! AND ITS MY SECOND TIME READING YOUR STORY!lol i really think max is hot