for The Checkout Lane3/11/2010 c1 AshleyInWriterland
Aw, haha, this was funny. I feel a bit bad for Annie, but not a hardcore badness, seeing as it was just a crush (or at least I got that impression)...you know? This story almost reminded me of Taylor the Latte Boy.
-Girlie
Aw, haha, this was funny. I feel a bit bad for Annie, but not a hardcore badness, seeing as it was just a crush (or at least I got that impression)...you know? This story almost reminded me of Taylor the Latte Boy.
-Girlie
3/31/2009 c1 
1eGardensHahaha
Ohoho!
Good, job, I could feel what she was feeling.
I wasn't expecting the ending :x
1eGardensHahahaOhoho!
Good, job, I could feel what she was feeling.
I wasn't expecting the ending :x
3/30/2009 c1 13lovely-fox-xo
I really, really liked this. It was so funny, with the eleven item man and the thousand teeth, and t he bologna guy. You're a very talented writer. =] Thanks for posting this, it was really nice to read.
13lovely-fox-xoI really, really liked this. It was so funny, with the eleven item man and the thousand teeth, and t he bologna guy. You're a very talented writer. =] Thanks for posting this, it was really nice to read.
3/29/2009 c1 missmolliemoe
Even though this story is tiny it's hilarious (The stale gum and Mr. 11 items. priceless) i liked it. if you get a chance ( i know people hate it when other people do this) but i really need people to read my story if you get time. i only have one. Good story :)
Even though this story is tiny it's hilarious (The stale gum and Mr. 11 items. priceless) i liked it. if you get a chance ( i know people hate it when other people do this) but i really need people to read my story if you get time. i only have one. Good story :)