for An Imperfection8/27/2009 c1 
3JGPoetry
Very nice. Everyone can relate, I would think, and the last two lines really summed it up. Another fave.
3JGPoetryVery nice. Everyone can relate, I would think, and the last two lines really summed it up. Another fave.
8/5/2009 c1 21kunoichi-socks
Bah. This is just so great, I can relate to this too well. I loved the lines, "How weak that smile is. How empty those eyes look." I could just see it. Excellent writing!
21kunoichi-socksBah. This is just so great, I can relate to this too well. I loved the lines, "How weak that smile is. How empty those eyes look." I could just see it. Excellent writing!
6/13/2009 c1 1Natural and fake beauty
wonderful. i love the last two lines. they wrape this poem us beautyfully
1Natural and fake beautywonderful. i love the last two lines. they wrape this poem us beautyfully
4/23/2009 c1 16chromo freak
Solid, well-written poem, I really think the last line pulls it together nicely, nice work, I enjoyed it.
16chromo freakSolid, well-written poem, I really think the last line pulls it together nicely, nice work, I enjoyed it.
3/30/2009 c1 70rolliepollie44
I love this. It's short, it's sad, beautiful imagery, and i just love how much impact you had in it, and how much hurt is running through it. :D Favorite part would have to be the ending, fantastic. :) I loved it!
Rolliepollie44
70rolliepollie44I love this. It's short, it's sad, beautiful imagery, and i just love how much impact you had in it, and how much hurt is running through it. :D Favorite part would have to be the ending, fantastic. :) I loved it!
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