for The Beauty and the Beast9/7/2011 c3 
10Ardina Falconhurst
Awe! I loved it! It wasn't even that cliche, it was adorable! I really liked your characters and how you had them correlate with Beauty and the Beast. Thanks for writing an awesome story! Keep the great work up!
~Pepper
10Ardina FalconhurstAwe! I loved it! It wasn't even that cliche, it was adorable! I really liked your characters and how you had them correlate with Beauty and the Beast. Thanks for writing an awesome story! Keep the great work up!
~Pepper
1/29/2011 c3 Under a Rain Cloud
Aw, that was cute...again another great chapter. I liked this story, great job! XD
Aw, that was cute...again another great chapter. I liked this story, great job! XD
1/29/2011 c2 Under a Rain Cloud
Ah! I really liked this one! Seriuosl, this is exactly like me and my friend (besides the huge family an long seperations) Although I've never dated anyone, I did talk about a lot of kids in my class to try and get him jealous, but i don't think it worked...Anyway, I really liked this chapter! I don't think I saw any mistakes, and I loved the part with Adam's thoughts. haha, so funny...
Ah! I really liked this one! Seriuosl, this is exactly like me and my friend (besides the huge family an long seperations) Although I've never dated anyone, I did talk about a lot of kids in my class to try and get him jealous, but i don't think it worked...Anyway, I really liked this chapter! I don't think I saw any mistakes, and I loved the part with Adam's thoughts. haha, so funny...
1/29/2011 c1 Under a Rain Cloud
I liked it! it was a bit long, but it understanable for a first chapter, you've gotta get things set up and stuff. There were a few mistakes, but nothing too too major. Overall, it made me smile. Good job! XD
I liked it! it was a bit long, but it understanable for a first chapter, you've gotta get things set up and stuff. There were a few mistakes, but nothing too too major. Overall, it made me smile. Good job! XD
4/7/2010 c3 4pun intended
That was really adorable! :D
I'm a sucker for a bit of jealousy, misunderstandings and a good old fashioned love triangle ^_^
Keep writing!
4pun intendedThat was really adorable! :D
I'm a sucker for a bit of jealousy, misunderstandings and a good old fashioned love triangle ^_^
Keep writing!
9/30/2009 c3 13Ruby Kart
Aw, it's so good! Yeah, the story fits completely (although Adam doesn't seem like a beast) but rather one of the most gentleman like characters I have read.
You don't waste time dealing with the looks of the characters but leave that to out imaginations and just give us the important details.
It all fits together so wonderfully, and is full of dramatic irony because we as readers know what the other thinks. You focus a lot of Adam's thoughts and feelings even though it's written in third person.
But we can see that she felt the same way all along. The little episodes about her stiffening and being slightly nervous are like little clues into the mind of Belle.
I really like it. Clearly written and it flows beautifully.
13Ruby KartAw, it's so good! Yeah, the story fits completely (although Adam doesn't seem like a beast) but rather one of the most gentleman like characters I have read.
You don't waste time dealing with the looks of the characters but leave that to out imaginations and just give us the important details.
It all fits together so wonderfully, and is full of dramatic irony because we as readers know what the other thinks. You focus a lot of Adam's thoughts and feelings even though it's written in third person.
But we can see that she felt the same way all along. The little episodes about her stiffening and being slightly nervous are like little clues into the mind of Belle.
I really like it. Clearly written and it flows beautifully.
4/8/2009 c1 8Skittlezzify
it's very good, but could use a lil bit more desription. but other than that keep it up. oh and if you could come rate and review my story,that would be awesome! thanks!
8Skittlezzifyit's very good, but could use a lil bit more desription. but other than that keep it up. oh and if you could come rate and review my story,that would be awesome! thanks!