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4/5/2009 c1 CandleQueen
"and I am lonely like the centaur in his ruins, who gazes up

into the sky without choice." I love that line...the imagery is so beautiful. :'(

"Things only exist within the timeframe of an eye blink."

'Time frame' should be two words, and I think "eye blink" should be 'eye-blink'.

"My memories shoot past—burning, exploding, vibrant with life

because I have not let go, and I regret what I did to him."

The powerful words you use ensure that the poem ends in a bang. Really wonderful work, and I hope I get to read more from you. :)


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