for suture10/8/2009 c1 
105qubed
you honestly leave me not really knowing what to think.
i feel that you're one of the best writers i've come across in a such a long time.
105qubedyou honestly leave me not really knowing what to think.
i feel that you're one of the best writers i've come across in a such a long time.
8/23/2009 c1 32Shelley Anderson
You're so intense. It's like you are baring everyone's soul. I can't get enough.
32Shelley AndersonYou're so intense. It's like you are baring everyone's soul. I can't get enough.
3/31/2009 c1 24Tuft of Fluff
Painfully beautiful... I can definitely relate. The word choice was effective and created amazing imagery. Great poem; it's on my favorites!
24Tuft of FluffPainfully beautiful... I can definitely relate. The word choice was effective and created amazing imagery. Great poem; it's on my favorites!
3/30/2009 c1 8black.magic89
This is amazing! Excellent visuals! "You kissed and tore into the knotting flesh like it was cobweb fragile" was my favorite line. In general it is just very unique, the fact that you are portraying love as violence is certainly different. Lots of people talk about how love hurts, but I have never heard it called a violence. Good job!
8black.magic89This is amazing! Excellent visuals! "You kissed and tore into the knotting flesh like it was cobweb fragile" was my favorite line. In general it is just very unique, the fact that you are portraying love as violence is certainly different. Lots of people talk about how love hurts, but I have never heard it called a violence. Good job!