Reviews: I'm Not a Poem or Story

4/7/2009 c1

25Faithless Eternity
Very beautiful. I really liked it, the narrator whether that be you or whether you are writing from a different point has made a very good point about love.

Again it rocked! Keep writing.

"I never wanted anything but yor love

Never knew anything but your touch

Never cared about anyone but you

Dont leave me waiting

I cant take this"

4/5/2009 c1

4The-Golden-Hour
i like this very muchly =]]

3/31/2009 c1

24I'm just a dreamer
Man! you are really good at showing

your emotions i dont have any suggestions

or anything but i think this is great so

keep writing

and i think you just sound like a pretty

normal person so i added you

from fellow fiction presser

britty :D

3/30/2009 c1

52bran4ever
I'm not sure I understand who the narrator was. I get the person their talking about is losing himself with the person he thought he loved, but didn't. But what is the narrator itself?

This is a wonderful metaphorical piece and I would like to know more about it.