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4/3/2009 c1 24I'm just a dreamer
good i really like it but that last bit confused me

i love that u put nature

in it

...

good job

from britty
3/30/2009 c1 14Kittalian
Ha! I was listening to Bette Midler's "Baby Mine" as I read this and it all just seemed to fit for some reason. Two deeply contasting things I know, but I suppose that it works.

Anyhow It was a great poem! Keep it up!
3/30/2009 c1 105The Exuberant
Great poem.

I really liked the second stanze. It stood out to me the most.

I wasn't quite content with the ending though...just didn't end the way I wanted, you know?

Either way, it was good.

Props

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