
1/31/2015 c1 Guest
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. youre such a good writer!
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. youre such a good writer!
4/27/2014 c1 Guest
I'm a few years late but this is just perfect.
I'm a few years late but this is just perfect.
9/27/2013 c1
1incrediblectopus
You spelled 'scared', 'scarred'. 'Scarred' means you have scars, 'scared' means you're afraid of something. Just thought I'd point that out. That's the only flaw I really noticed, so yeah, great story. I really liked it.

You spelled 'scared', 'scarred'. 'Scarred' means you have scars, 'scared' means you're afraid of something. Just thought I'd point that out. That's the only flaw I really noticed, so yeah, great story. I really liked it.
2/5/2013 c1 Insane darkness1
Could you make this a full length (can't remember how to spell that '-_-) story?
Could you make this a full length (can't remember how to spell that '-_-) story?
8/17/2012 c1 thedeathnoteneko
this was amazing! i specially love the ending it was hot!
this was amazing! i specially love the ending it was hot!
6/28/2012 c1 gib.mir.kuchen
verammte scheisse, this was really good :) I liked the sex szene too *blush* :P I would really like it when you would make a sequal... or something? maby? PRETTY PLEASE? :)
verammte scheisse, this was really good :) I liked the sex szene too *blush* :P I would really like it when you would make a sequal... or something? maby? PRETTY PLEASE? :)
6/16/2011 c1 i-wish-i-had-wings
mwahaha, go kyle xD i'm glad he was the top, seth definetly deserved a little pain..
mwahaha, go kyle xD i'm glad he was the top, seth definetly deserved a little pain..
3/31/2011 c1 misha
i really like this, it would be interesting if you wrote a follow up to this.
i really like this, it would be interesting if you wrote a follow up to this.
3/19/2011 c1
2J. Raven K
May have been long but damn it was perfect in every sense of the word...:D
xoxo GayLove

May have been long but damn it was perfect in every sense of the word...:D
xoxo GayLove