for Lunch Money1/21/2013 c4 AlexDowner
You need to update! :)
You need to update! :)
7/11/2009 c4 merecedeslove
I liked this chapter it got me all excited for the coming. Personally I like this new formate. I do think if the sex thing is all crushed together we might get lost. The sex parts though I think she be from both points of view. First of all this this is the girl first time so she won't know if she doing it right. Second the dude can fill us in on the stuff that she wouldn't know about the whole sex experience. That's just my opinion. Update soon please.
I liked this chapter it got me all excited for the coming. Personally I like this new formate. I do think if the sex thing is all crushed together we might get lost. The sex parts though I think she be from both points of view. First of all this this is the girl first time so she won't know if she doing it right. Second the dude can fill us in on the stuff that she wouldn't know about the whole sex experience. That's just my opinion. Update soon please.
7/10/2009 c4 
22Miss-X-Marie
*sigh* I think someone needs to chain you to a chair and force
you just to write... And whenever you stop someone should beat you with a rubber chicken! But honestly...its really good I like it lots so far
22Miss-X-Marie*sigh* I think someone needs to chain you to a chair and force
you just to write... And whenever you stop someone should beat you with a rubber chicken! But honestly...its really good I like it lots so far
7/10/2009 c3 2Selfina-Hikayu and Co
IF YOU DON'T KEEP WRITING THIS STORY! D: -wiggles rubber chicken...-
2Selfina-Hikayu and CoIF YOU DON'T KEEP WRITING THIS STORY! D: -wiggles rubber chicken...-
5/7/2009 c3 merecedeslove
Love the story so far. That is some what of an odd relationship, but like the story so far.
Love the story so far. That is some what of an odd relationship, but like the story so far.
5/7/2009 c2 merecedeslove
If I must say so myself that was a perfect amount of details. Love where this story seems to be going.
If I must say so myself that was a perfect amount of details. Love where this story seems to be going.