6/12/2009 c14 1Forever or Never
Oh, that doesn't really continue pure from the last one (Only in my eyes) but it feels the same and that is probably why you gave them seperate names while calling them both the end, because even though they leave questions to be answered, and seem like they might be about the same characters, you should really write a full poppa doom story, because it is a cool name but you could fill it up with a lot of concepts plus you could add more to it, it could have this and the last poem as a introduction it would go down very well.

6/12/2009 c12 Forever or Never
Kind of different, it is still very scary sounding, and it really puts a new meaning to the birth of christ, I think.

6/12/2009 c10 Forever or Never
good, I can't really pick what it means but it is kind of romantic, and kind of demanding sounding, still good though.

6/12/2009 c8 Forever or Never
This is a alright poem with a scary poem that doesn't doesn't seem to suit it, sorry but I guess this isn't my favourite poem. But it is still good

6/12/2009 c6 Forever or Never
Some how this collection feels scary and the poems feel connected in a distant way, you probably don't understad what I mean but most of the time I don't know what I mean, but een thought together the poems don't seem to tell and story and vary from topic to topic, somehow each poem seems the right temperature, (What did I just say...)

6/12/2009 c4 Forever or Never
This poem is good but I can't really feel a story, maybe there is one there and i'm just to blind but that doesn't matter because it is still a great poem.

6/12/2009 c2 Forever or Never
Kind of sad, I felt so sorry for all the characters in this poem, both the person telling the story and the person getting drunk somehow the name, party poem, goes well with it, and if this poem is based off true experiances I am so sorry...

4/13/2009 c1 6Michael Morbius
how darkly erotic indeed. I love this much.