for This Might Just be a Waste of Time4/1/2009 c1 
4Alaskan-Lone-Wolf
It's short. I think it might need some more description though. Add some more of the description to the characters, the people, the setting, the emotions and such. That way it'll be a more well-rounded story.
4Alaskan-Lone-WolfIt's short. I think it might need some more description though. Add some more of the description to the characters, the people, the setting, the emotions and such. That way it'll be a more well-rounded story.