for Hot Lakes Hotel5/23/2010 c5 jamie
wow great story theres never any good stories about ghosts. please update.
wow great story theres never any good stories about ghosts. please update.
5/22/2009 c5 
5AnNe StRyDeR
great story! i like the idea that u 2 switch off writing, thats totally awesome!
5AnNe StRyDeRgreat story! i like the idea that u 2 switch off writing, thats totally awesome!
4/26/2009 c1 horrorqueen11
I like it, but it's a little too obvious, you know? I'm sure you can do better. :)
I like it, but it's a little too obvious, you know? I'm sure you can do better. :)
4/26/2009 c5 5whisper-sweet-nothings
:) great chapter! I love how Billy admits he likes Daisy, lol. Anyways, I hope you can update soon!
- Christina
5whisper-sweet-nothings:) great chapter! I love how Billy admits he likes Daisy, lol. Anyways, I hope you can update soon!
- Christina
4/13/2009 c1 whisper-sweet-nothings
Hey, seems like a great story so far :) I like the short summary.
- Christina
Hey, seems like a great story so far :) I like the short summary.
- Christina
4/9/2009 c1 raebeez
All three chapters are very interesting.
The description of the setting is very well done and really sets the mood for a creepy place.
I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work you two. c:
All three chapters are very interesting.
The description of the setting is very well done and really sets the mood for a creepy place.
I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work you two. c:
4/2/2009 c1 2RachelJaNell
I really like where this is going. It has a relatable protagonist and good descriptions to draw the reader in. Obviously, I look forward to reading more!
Rachel J
PS. Check out Blank Stare. I'd love to get some feedback.
2RachelJaNellI really like where this is going. It has a relatable protagonist and good descriptions to draw the reader in. Obviously, I look forward to reading more!
Rachel J
PS. Check out Blank Stare. I'd love to get some feedback.