for In the Eyes of a Really Bad Stalker11/13/2010 c1 Princess Mariana
Oh, my gosh. This is, like, the best one-shot I have read in a very long time!
Oh, my gosh. This is, like, the best one-shot I have read in a very long time!
10/15/2010 c1 silver rocker1490
cooliio!
cooliio!
5/7/2010 c1 
1P.F Ally
reminds me of "The Wonders of a Guy's Boxers" BUT YEAH HAHAHAH damn this is so funny xP
and cute
1P.F Allyreminds me of "The Wonders of a Guy's Boxers" BUT YEAH HAHAHAH damn this is so funny xP
and cute
6/15/2009 c1 6Just-Unlucky
this is really funny.
if it wasnt meant to be funny...well too bad.
JU
P.S does that sound like jew?
6Just-Unluckythis is really funny.
if it wasnt meant to be funny...well too bad.
JU
P.S does that sound like jew?
4/15/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
A few things: firstly, “Shut it miser.” (typo?)
Also, her little, "I, (full name here)," is not necessary. Personally I find it a little annoying when full names are randomly inserted in oneshots. I like anonymity. Just the first name is fine.
Also, I felt this was a little choppy (the writing), and I wish this could've been more story-ish and flowed better instead of thought after thought after thought (of Sonya's). But this was cute, albeit a little creepy, and I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnA few things: firstly, “Shut it miser.” (typo?)
Also, her little, "I, (full name here)," is not necessary. Personally I find it a little annoying when full names are randomly inserted in oneshots. I like anonymity. Just the first name is fine.
Also, I felt this was a little choppy (the writing), and I wish this could've been more story-ish and flowed better instead of thought after thought after thought (of Sonya's). But this was cute, albeit a little creepy, and I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
4/14/2009 c1 OoohLookACat
ohh that is so cute.
stalking a guy
but then finding out he's stalking you too
adorable
in a really creepy way
loved it
izzie
ohh that is so cute.
stalking a guy
but then finding out he's stalking you too
adorable
in a really creepy way
loved it
izzie
4/14/2009 c1 24Ravina
Love the eyebrow thing! I always irritate my friends with it because they can't do it and I can...na-na-na-boo-boo!
Oh, one thing:
"So that peaked my interest."
It's piqued, not peaked - a lot of people make that same mistake.
Good job once again!
- Rebekah
24RavinaLove the eyebrow thing! I always irritate my friends with it because they can't do it and I can...na-na-na-boo-boo!
Oh, one thing:
"So that peaked my interest."
It's piqued, not peaked - a lot of people make that same mistake.
Good job once again!
- Rebekah
4/4/2009 c1 singjoylalala
it's funny. i think it would be good if you made it into a full story
it's funny. i think it would be good if you made it into a full story
4/4/2009 c1 5annoyance
Cliche, but fairly well written.
Decent spelling, but work on your use of punctuation. =)
5annoyanceCliche, but fairly well written.
Decent spelling, but work on your use of punctuation. =)
4/4/2009 c1 44zeck-zeecola8
This is very interesting. It has some potential and holds some humor. Seriously embarrassing humor. You know how people feel when they see a sexy guy and want to stalk him. This explains everything. Keep updating.
44zeck-zeecola8This is very interesting. It has some potential and holds some humor. Seriously embarrassing humor. You know how people feel when they see a sexy guy and want to stalk him. This explains everything. Keep updating.