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for The Heart Will Not Win Against The Mind

5/15/2009 c1 1Mynthia Fae
eek! I agree whole heartedly. It feels like when you are led by your heart everything falls apart. But I have found when you let your mind do all the thinking you never end up happy either (aka paranoia kicks in and I overthink everything). And the mind and heart have issues finding that happy medium. least in my opinion lol. And on to my review... I did not just get sidetracked. Sh... I love the different feelings between the beginning and the end.
4/14/2009 c4 28SpaceKid
Wow this poem is really good! I like how it ends on a question. This poem has probally toped my list, of favourite poems of yours.
4/13/2009 c1 6Michael Morbius
how true it is. Sometimes we forget to approach love with both Logic and Mentality. But is something is true here, you've shown strength. I admire that.
4/10/2009 c1 11chipmunks love squirrels
i liked it! it was a joy to read. good job!
4/4/2009 c1 28SpaceKid
I really, really liked this poem. I felt I could somehow relate.

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