for Sandstorm4/4/2009 c1 
6Kalista Jia
Already the first line captures my attention. "In the valley of the damned" and "The Valley of the Kings" I like how you describe these places.
When we entered, we were cursed to an eternal abyss of sand and sun, with which soon the dehydration, and constant sight of sand dunes, left pressure on our very souls, mindset, and mental health. (It is amazing. This is the first time I read about a battle with Egytians)
You are very good in it, you know? A shame this fic didn't have review yet. Their loss!
6Kalista JiaAlready the first line captures my attention. "In the valley of the damned" and "The Valley of the Kings" I like how you describe these places.
When we entered, we were cursed to an eternal abyss of sand and sun, with which soon the dehydration, and constant sight of sand dunes, left pressure on our very souls, mindset, and mental health. (It is amazing. This is the first time I read about a battle with Egytians)
You are very good in it, you know? A shame this fic didn't have review yet. Their loss!