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4/4/2015 c1 1Mrs.McLaren
Sweet little poem :)
4/4/2009 c1 77A Sweet Escape
Amazing, amazing poem. Some of the rhymes seemed a little off, but it was a really great poem. I loved the oxymoron, "So scared of dying, that I stopped living" it's really brilliant. The last line though, I would change to (delet the "And"), "I know death can come, and it will bring grace." I think that flows a bit better when saying it after the other line.

Prongs though.

4/4/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
AMazing poetry from you!

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