4/4/2009 c1 77A Sweet Escape
Amazing, amazing poem. Some of the rhymes seemed a little off, but it was a really great poem. I loved the oxymoron, "So scared of dying, that I stopped living" it's really brilliant. The last line though, I would change to (delet the "And"), "I know death can come, and it will bring grace." I think that flows a bit better when saying it after the other line.

Prongs though.

xkatt