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8/16/2010 c1 13behindthesebigbrowneyes
i think this poem is about an argument between two lovers yet there is a sense of calm from both of them and they just want the fight to be over
4/4/2009 c1 10LeLa London
it seems like the narrator was together with their significant other where everything was great because they had each other and content. Soon their place of love slowly falls and things aren't the same. the narrator wants things to be care free and fine again. the lake side scenery seems to be a metaphor for the poem and the couple's content companionship to decline in closeness. i thought the writing was good by the way.

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