for Quit You4/5/2009 c1 
54Indefinite
wow. interesting concept. my favorite line was "I was Advil and you were heroin". simple. possibly typical, maybe not, but perfect all the same:)
54Indefinitewow. interesting concept. my favorite line was "I was Advil and you were heroin". simple. possibly typical, maybe not, but perfect all the same:)
4/4/2009 c1 10LeLa London
superb poem. loved all the literary devices. they were clever and used effectively.
side note: do you time read someone else's work? i've written some stuff and i wanted you to check it out for feedback. thanks
10LeLa Londonsuperb poem. loved all the literary devices. they were clever and used effectively.
side note: do you time read someone else's work? i've written some stuff and i wanted you to check it out for feedback. thanks