for The Garden of Wish4/5/2009 c1 Chancee
This review is for you from the Promised Land Forum's -Oracle Crucible Game!
I like the imagination you put in this poem, and I like the descriptions.
Funny that your friends are flowers, I guess so that they can bloom...
Anyway, this was timed nicely and I believe it had a nice flow.
Now at the end when you said your 'world is everywhere and everything' I felt it was slightly redundant but still over all this was really good.
Momo - The Promised Land Forum #3 - Join us if you dare :P
This review is for you from the Promised Land Forum's -Oracle Crucible Game!
I like the imagination you put in this poem, and I like the descriptions.
Funny that your friends are flowers, I guess so that they can bloom...
Anyway, this was timed nicely and I believe it had a nice flow.
Now at the end when you said your 'world is everywhere and everything' I felt it was slightly redundant but still over all this was really good.
Momo - The Promised Land Forum #3 - Join us if you dare :P