4/8/2009 c1 75Vanyalli
I like it. Throughout the poem your describing this /thing/ and towards the end it seems like it is getting faster and rished because you "must stop this masquerade." Like, you want to save him. Very nice transition there. I also liked the "putrid hell-fragrance" line. It was written with elequence. Heh. Very nice job! -Jessi