7/29/2009 c1 26Mirabella
Reminds me of Dorian Gray and his portrait, he could never look on his true self, or he'd become it and die. But he longed to see it, people want to know who they really are in the end, mostly. :)

Nice poem. :D

4/6/2009 c1 3Robyn Lee
i'm afraid i am no good at reviewing poetry but for what it is worth i liked it