for The Search For My Kiss5/23/2009 c11 MyLifeIsMe
I'm sorry about your head sounds painful... anyway this story is hilarious I couldn't stop laughing at the fish and the river thing what an awesomely funny way to describe it, the code language that Leah and Katie use to communicate are equally genius... what an amazing twist to the plot not only do they have to find Zorro ( which I'm really hoping is Ryan) now Leah is pregnant! :D
Anyway I'm loving the story so far and I can't wait till you update :D x
I'm sorry about your head sounds painful... anyway this story is hilarious I couldn't stop laughing at the fish and the river thing what an awesomely funny way to describe it, the code language that Leah and Katie use to communicate are equally genius... what an amazing twist to the plot not only do they have to find Zorro ( which I'm really hoping is Ryan) now Leah is pregnant! :D
Anyway I'm loving the story so far and I can't wait till you update :D x
5/22/2009 c11 
13Ruby Kart
I wish you could see the size of the smile on my face.
Normally I'm not one for Romance fluff, but this is SO cute! And no offense, it's not fluff. It's like a comedy/drama/chick-flick/romance. I absolutely love it!
I could really use a smartie bar now. I love those things! too bad they don't get them in the US. *sigh* oh well.
Still loving the story. I hope Jacko takes everything cooly (i think that's a word).
Thanks for the Thankyou. I hope you like my stories. Don't forget reviewing!
13Ruby KartI wish you could see the size of the smile on my face.
Normally I'm not one for Romance fluff, but this is SO cute! And no offense, it's not fluff. It's like a comedy/drama/chick-flick/romance. I absolutely love it!
I could really use a smartie bar now. I love those things! too bad they don't get them in the US. *sigh* oh well.
Still loving the story. I hope Jacko takes everything cooly (i think that's a word).
Thanks for the Thankyou. I hope you like my stories. Don't forget reviewing!
5/22/2009 c10 sally n
wow im so glad i stumbled across your story! i want to praise you for pulling of a funny story not everyone can. also was it ryan that kissed her and if not plz let them end up together. update soon.
wow im so glad i stumbled across your story! i want to praise you for pulling of a funny story not everyone can. also was it ryan that kissed her and if not plz let them end up together. update soon.
5/21/2009 c10 Ruby Kart
YAY! an update.
And a really good one! It did seem like a filler chapter, but really realistic. I love the part in the clinic. That is drop dead funny!
Ryan, still my favorite. *sigh* why do the fictional characters always have to be WAY hotter than guys incarnate? lol
Loved the chapter, and looking for more! Hope you get better. And if you get bored writing, plz check out one of my stories, I'd really love it!
YAY! an update.
And a really good one! It did seem like a filler chapter, but really realistic. I love the part in the clinic. That is drop dead funny!
Ryan, still my favorite. *sigh* why do the fictional characters always have to be WAY hotter than guys incarnate? lol
Loved the chapter, and looking for more! Hope you get better. And if you get bored writing, plz check out one of my stories, I'd really love it!
5/10/2009 c9 14frizzle-tastic
Leah's WHAT! Poor ickle girlie. She doesn't want to have an abortion but if she doesn't she might loose Jacko, well she's scared she will, and her parents will get really angry and she'll be a teenage mum and she won't be able to do what she really wants with her life. God this sucks. Still who is this mysterious Kyle from the past that is mentioned so much. More importantly who is her Zorro? Oh PLEASE update soon! You can't leave me hanging like this, PLEASE? =]
frizzle
14frizzle-tasticLeah's WHAT! Poor ickle girlie. She doesn't want to have an abortion but if she doesn't she might loose Jacko, well she's scared she will, and her parents will get really angry and she'll be a teenage mum and she won't be able to do what she really wants with her life. God this sucks. Still who is this mysterious Kyle from the past that is mentioned so much. More importantly who is her Zorro? Oh PLEASE update soon! You can't leave me hanging like this, PLEASE? =]
frizzle
5/5/2009 c9 13Ruby Kart
The ending, I was waiting for. Not that I was hoping she was pregnant, but from the character you described Leah as, you know something major is up if she's really scared about it.
Again, there are spelling and grammar problems, but I can't point them all out. You just write such a cute story, that I have to keep reading!
I love the mudsurfing idea. I seriously am gonna go out and look for a place to do that now! I also want to play laser tag in the mall. where do you come up with these crazy ideas?
I still like Ryan, he's my fav of all her friends so far. IDK y, he just seems like the misunderstood type. And I like those kinds, because they eventually come around. I hope he's her Zorro :D
What's the deal with Kyle? I hope you can elaborate on that earlier. Also, what happened to Ryan that he started being withdrawn from his friends? I know you mentioned an accident.
13Ruby KartThe ending, I was waiting for. Not that I was hoping she was pregnant, but from the character you described Leah as, you know something major is up if she's really scared about it.
Again, there are spelling and grammar problems, but I can't point them all out. You just write such a cute story, that I have to keep reading!
I love the mudsurfing idea. I seriously am gonna go out and look for a place to do that now! I also want to play laser tag in the mall. where do you come up with these crazy ideas?
I still like Ryan, he's my fav of all her friends so far. IDK y, he just seems like the misunderstood type. And I like those kinds, because they eventually come around. I hope he's her Zorro :D
What's the deal with Kyle? I hope you can elaborate on that earlier. Also, what happened to Ryan that he started being withdrawn from his friends? I know you mentioned an accident.
5/4/2009 c9 47oNjA
Yay! I'm so glad you used that, mudding is so much fun! This chapter was just hilarious...that is until the end. Is Leah really pregnant by Jacko? Or is it like someone else that we'll find out about later? This chapter was great! Another thing that would be funny to see would be Katie with a job...I would love to see her as a waitress or working in a small ice cream shop, the amount of accidents that she could endure would be ridiculous! Yeah I worked at a pizza place once, worst choice in a job for me because I'm inasanely accident prone so I burnt myself numerous times and dropped tons of food! Fun times though! The ice cream place I work at during the summer is so much better because it's tons of free ice cream (despite the fact that I'm lactose intolerant) so we're always really hyper and I, again, drop tons of food everywhere...I also hurt myself very easily, I take a mental record of bruises on my body every morning because I have no idea where I get them from! Just interesting tidbits about me...but it would be hilarious to read about Katie being hyped up on sugar at a job where she has to work with the public...now I'm basically just rambling~ Great chapter and story! Can't wait to read more!
~bbyluv
47oNjAYay! I'm so glad you used that, mudding is so much fun! This chapter was just hilarious...that is until the end. Is Leah really pregnant by Jacko? Or is it like someone else that we'll find out about later? This chapter was great! Another thing that would be funny to see would be Katie with a job...I would love to see her as a waitress or working in a small ice cream shop, the amount of accidents that she could endure would be ridiculous! Yeah I worked at a pizza place once, worst choice in a job for me because I'm inasanely accident prone so I burnt myself numerous times and dropped tons of food! Fun times though! The ice cream place I work at during the summer is so much better because it's tons of free ice cream (despite the fact that I'm lactose intolerant) so we're always really hyper and I, again, drop tons of food everywhere...I also hurt myself very easily, I take a mental record of bruises on my body every morning because I have no idea where I get them from! Just interesting tidbits about me...but it would be hilarious to read about Katie being hyped up on sugar at a job where she has to work with the public...now I'm basically just rambling~ Great chapter and story! Can't wait to read more!
~bbyluv
5/4/2009 c9 16She Lovely
Leah has officially scared the crap out of me.
But it's just ironic, it was too perfect and something was bound to happen.
It's not a teen romance without pregnancy, I'd say you're a mastermind for adding that one in!
I fully, thoroughly, and completely loved this chapter!
Kudos!
p.s.
It seems I'll have to try mud surfing, and it's the perfect time where I'm at(rainy season).
16She LovelyLeah has officially scared the crap out of me.
But it's just ironic, it was too perfect and something was bound to happen.
It's not a teen romance without pregnancy, I'd say you're a mastermind for adding that one in!
I fully, thoroughly, and completely loved this chapter!
Kudos!
p.s.
It seems I'll have to try mud surfing, and it's the perfect time where I'm at(rainy season).
5/4/2009 c9 WritingWithChocolate
O_O...leah's eggo is PREGGO? woow..im hoping its jacko's though...and who's kyle again? anyhoo...AWESOME chapter...now i wanna try mudsurfing...it sounds hella fun...w/o the whole ouch-i-banged-my-head-on-a-pole-that-seemed-to-appear-from-nowhere..lolz..anyhoo..UPDATE!
O_O...leah's eggo is PREGGO? woow..im hoping its jacko's though...and who's kyle again? anyhoo...AWESOME chapter...now i wanna try mudsurfing...it sounds hella fun...w/o the whole ouch-i-banged-my-head-on-a-pole-that-seemed-to-appear-from-nowhere..lolz..anyhoo..UPDATE!
5/4/2009 c9 3Till Tonight Do Us Part
So I really think Kyle died and also he was a really big part of her life and she cared a lot and she went out with him and that Ryan loved her when that was going on. AlsoI like the mud surfing, i have to try that sometimes. Also I never saw that coming at all, Leah pregnant smart, strong, Leah but I don't know if she can tell Jacko though hes not that mature and that might be detrimental to him.
3Till Tonight Do Us PartSo I really think Kyle died and also he was a really big part of her life and she cared a lot and she went out with him and that Ryan loved her when that was going on. AlsoI like the mud surfing, i have to try that sometimes. Also I never saw that coming at all, Leah pregnant smart, strong, Leah but I don't know if she can tell Jacko though hes not that mature and that might be detrimental to him.
5/4/2009 c9 19Hydie
I don't know how many words will fit into a message. If I need to copy a chapter to help rework it, I'll email it to you... at least, if I can... if not, I'll make the best of it. :) Anyway, I like this chappy! I kinda suspected the pregnancy as soon as Leah started babbling. :-D
19HydieI don't know how many words will fit into a message. If I need to copy a chapter to help rework it, I'll email it to you... at least, if I can... if not, I'll make the best of it. :) Anyway, I like this chappy! I kinda suspected the pregnancy as soon as Leah started babbling. :-D
5/4/2009 c9 CrazyInAGoodWay
O SNAP! lol ok i kinda figured taht was what it was but anyways i llove this story kk? lol like its one of my favorites! post more soon! because u love me and u waant to live 2 see next year!
O SNAP! lol ok i kinda figured taht was what it was but anyways i llove this story kk? lol like its one of my favorites! post more soon! because u love me and u waant to live 2 see next year!
5/4/2009 c1 CrazyInAGoodWay
it sounds interesting lol but u might want to take a secont look at the chapter name... lol its prologue not prolouge :)
it sounds interesting lol but u might want to take a secont look at the chapter name... lol its prologue not prolouge :)