for The Search For My Kiss7/28/2009 c1 Grammar Nazi
Since you did not capitalize your I's, I will not read your story.
Since you did not capitalize your I's, I will not read your story.
7/24/2009 c23 3DarkGoddess3
Really great story. I loved all the characters. Knew it was him all along.
Really great story. I loved all the characters. Knew it was him all along.
7/15/2009 c6 PerryThePlatypus
Okay so well personally i think that Ryan kissed her cux u know i just have this feeling when i read this story so far that Ryan Likes her. And... maybe it was him who stared at her... ok yeah, thats my opininon. Byes Bitches!
XOXO
Okay so well personally i think that Ryan kissed her cux u know i just have this feeling when i read this story so far that Ryan Likes her. And... maybe it was him who stared at her... ok yeah, thats my opininon. Byes Bitches!
XOXO
7/3/2009 c14 Jeyka
ive found this story not too long ago, and im completely addicted to it. as much as it litteraly makes me laugh out loud, this chapter made me cry, with tears running down my face, really. can't wait to read the rest, but that will only be tomorrow because you got me up until 2 AM now and i am exhausted haha
ive found this story not too long ago, and im completely addicted to it. as much as it litteraly makes me laugh out loud, this chapter made me cry, with tears running down my face, really. can't wait to read the rest, but that will only be tomorrow because you got me up until 2 AM now and i am exhausted haha
6/29/2009 c23 
17oHriginal
Oh My God you've written a sequel that's so bloody awesome, I am totally going to get started on it after I have written this review. I am aiming to make it pretty long because god dammit I have waited 23 chapters, to write a review - even though I could have written one for every chapter, therefore giving you more reviews, but I don't know, I just felt like really going at it and giving you one big long review right at the end of this absolutely amazing story.
damn, my fingers have got pins and needles in them already..
hmm..
anyway.
Firstly, what a brilliant title... I came across this through someones favourite story, and I'm glad because your writing style is just so hilarious. It's been two days, since I've been at it, reading this at ungodly hours of the night, and finally I am content that I have finished it. I can finally go to sleep tonight, with a smile on my face.
I don't think I've laughed so much in my life before. It's just so refreshing to read each chapter. I have to admit that I don't usually like reading extra long chapters, because on a laptop, your eyes just go all fuzzy, and you get a migrane etc etc and it just takes the mick, but I stuck to it, and I'm glad.
You make it so simple to read, with all the little comments, I just felt like I was in Katie's head!
I didn't know you could have so many different nicknames for Katie you know!
About the grammar and stuff... yeah I won't lie. Alot of it was pretty bad, so I guess you didn't find a beta to do it up for you? If you haven't I would totally love to, because I found myself correcting things here and there. I am not a professional but I can totally smarten it up a tad bit. Still, it was an amazing piece of writing.
The content... a plot that has been written so many times before, but you made it so individual and unique, that even though I'm pretty sure all the readers knew it was going to be Ryan in the end, we still kept on reading, because it's about HOW and not WHO.
I love Ryan by the way. He's totally cool. I doubt very much watch Disney channel, but Ryan kinda reminds me of this guy on Sonny With A Chance, whose name I can't seem to remember.. Chad, I think it is. But yeah, he's totally cool. I love how close all the friends are.
I was amazed to start loving damien as the chapters progressed. I think because he helped katie a lot, the readers just automatically start to love him too? I hope so. And he's so funny.
This story is just a whole bunch of jokes. Your life must be so entertaining, that you can write things like this!
I stopped liking Leah's character and I'm not sure why but I think she was so strong at the beginning, and that she just ended up kinda distancing herself from the rest of the group. That's realistic though, because of the baby. Jako is hilarious. I know someone with the same name, so I have his picture in my head, and he's the exact opposite, but I still loved that character.
I think Alec had to be my fave, because he's just so funny. Fi is cute and ditsy. Where did the name come from, I wonder?
I love the whole sad story and how you made us wait a long time before finding out what happened. It didn't turn into a sob story. it just became really realistic.which Is what life is really about I guess. people die, all the time.
we all will eventually.
we all move on eventually.
hm what else? I laughed at all the pranks and random little filler chapters because it just made the story much more special and not just random rom com, which I guess is what the story really is, at the end of the day.
You're from UK! Woo, where abouts? I'm happy we have someone repping for us. the talented writers on here, are mostly americans, or so I have noticed.
..
Right this is not long enough, but I'm so tired and I need to get some sleep so I will leave it like this.
Brilliant story
can't wait to get dug in to the next one.
thank you for completely making my DAY! and night i guess lol
and OH that kiss with katie and ryan was absolutely perfect. I found myself missing my boyfriend when I read it. It was probably my fave bit out of the whole story...
keep it up!
17oHriginalOh My God you've written a sequel that's so bloody awesome, I am totally going to get started on it after I have written this review. I am aiming to make it pretty long because god dammit I have waited 23 chapters, to write a review - even though I could have written one for every chapter, therefore giving you more reviews, but I don't know, I just felt like really going at it and giving you one big long review right at the end of this absolutely amazing story.
damn, my fingers have got pins and needles in them already..
hmm..
anyway.
Firstly, what a brilliant title... I came across this through someones favourite story, and I'm glad because your writing style is just so hilarious. It's been two days, since I've been at it, reading this at ungodly hours of the night, and finally I am content that I have finished it. I can finally go to sleep tonight, with a smile on my face.
I don't think I've laughed so much in my life before. It's just so refreshing to read each chapter. I have to admit that I don't usually like reading extra long chapters, because on a laptop, your eyes just go all fuzzy, and you get a migrane etc etc and it just takes the mick, but I stuck to it, and I'm glad.
You make it so simple to read, with all the little comments, I just felt like I was in Katie's head!
I didn't know you could have so many different nicknames for Katie you know!
About the grammar and stuff... yeah I won't lie. Alot of it was pretty bad, so I guess you didn't find a beta to do it up for you? If you haven't I would totally love to, because I found myself correcting things here and there. I am not a professional but I can totally smarten it up a tad bit. Still, it was an amazing piece of writing.
The content... a plot that has been written so many times before, but you made it so individual and unique, that even though I'm pretty sure all the readers knew it was going to be Ryan in the end, we still kept on reading, because it's about HOW and not WHO.
I love Ryan by the way. He's totally cool. I doubt very much watch Disney channel, but Ryan kinda reminds me of this guy on Sonny With A Chance, whose name I can't seem to remember.. Chad, I think it is. But yeah, he's totally cool. I love how close all the friends are.
I was amazed to start loving damien as the chapters progressed. I think because he helped katie a lot, the readers just automatically start to love him too? I hope so. And he's so funny.
This story is just a whole bunch of jokes. Your life must be so entertaining, that you can write things like this!
I stopped liking Leah's character and I'm not sure why but I think she was so strong at the beginning, and that she just ended up kinda distancing herself from the rest of the group. That's realistic though, because of the baby. Jako is hilarious. I know someone with the same name, so I have his picture in my head, and he's the exact opposite, but I still loved that character.
I think Alec had to be my fave, because he's just so funny. Fi is cute and ditsy. Where did the name come from, I wonder?
I love the whole sad story and how you made us wait a long time before finding out what happened. It didn't turn into a sob story. it just became really realistic.which Is what life is really about I guess. people die, all the time.
we all will eventually.
we all move on eventually.
hm what else? I laughed at all the pranks and random little filler chapters because it just made the story much more special and not just random rom com, which I guess is what the story really is, at the end of the day.
You're from UK! Woo, where abouts? I'm happy we have someone repping for us. the talented writers on here, are mostly americans, or so I have noticed.
..
Right this is not long enough, but I'm so tired and I need to get some sleep so I will leave it like this.
Brilliant story
can't wait to get dug in to the next one.
thank you for completely making my DAY! and night i guess lol
and OH that kiss with katie and ryan was absolutely perfect. I found myself missing my boyfriend when I read it. It was probably my fave bit out of the whole story...
keep it up!
6/19/2009 c21 Guest
O! This Chapter was so perfect. Her fainting spell couldn't have come at a better time! Makes me wanna slap all her "so called" friends! Nice writing. :)
O! This Chapter was so perfect. Her fainting spell couldn't have come at a better time! Makes me wanna slap all her "so called" friends! Nice writing. :)
6/13/2009 c23 19Hydie
I'm still working on your first chapter... granted, it's taken me a little longer then I expected (i'm swamped with work and stuff). I like the ending. There were a couple of characters who seemed superfluous, but other then that, I'd LOVE to read the sequel!
19HydieI'm still working on your first chapter... granted, it's taken me a little longer then I expected (i'm swamped with work and stuff). I like the ending. There were a couple of characters who seemed superfluous, but other then that, I'd LOVE to read the sequel!
6/13/2009 c23 LocalYokel
I fudging loved this story! You're awesome at writing! I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff. I can't believe katie didn't get serious brain damage after hitting her head so much, I would've put her in a bubble or something, although that can't really help with the love life can it eh? Haha :)
I'm deffo adding this to my favourites :D
Can't wait for the sequel!
I fudging loved this story! You're awesome at writing! I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff. I can't believe katie didn't get serious brain damage after hitting her head so much, I would've put her in a bubble or something, although that can't really help with the love life can it eh? Haha :)
I'm deffo adding this to my favourites :D
Can't wait for the sequel!
6/11/2009 c23 luv-u-lots
Is the skank coming back in th sequel? I hope Katie and Ryan stay together... please don't make him fall out of love with her or anything like that :'( it'd be REALLY sad!
On a lighter note...
I loved your story! I'm looking forward to the sequel!
Is the skank coming back in th sequel? I hope Katie and Ryan stay together... please don't make him fall out of love with her or anything like that :'( it'd be REALLY sad!
On a lighter note...
I loved your story! I'm looking forward to the sequel!
6/10/2009 c2 3Loveless Breath
OOH CAN I BE YOUR BETA? Or are you..done... since I saw that you have a sequel...
Well, if you want one, I'm always available!
3Loveless BreathOOH CAN I BE YOUR BETA? Or are you..done... since I saw that you have a sequel...
Well, if you want one, I'm always available!
6/8/2009 c23 6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTIC
omg that story was fuckin amazing! no lie i totally loved it! and i cant wait to read the sequel! great job, i loved Katie and her friends, they totally remind me of me and my group! wow, anyway it was a good story, cant wait for more!
6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTIComg that story was fuckin amazing! no lie i totally loved it! and i cant wait to read the sequel! great job, i loved Katie and her friends, they totally remind me of me and my group! wow, anyway it was a good story, cant wait for more!