for The Search For My Kiss6/4/2009 c19 
13Ruby Kart
Aw, we love you too. Although, it might be in the creepy way, JK JK JK JK lol
Yay! I loved how she told her off. haha, it was good. I could see it all happening. I bet Cassie's face hit the floor. And why would she dress like that if she had a BF, I mean, that just doesn't work.
Only 5 more chappies, aw. I loved this story, and I can't wait to find out who Zorro really is. Provided we are going to find that out still.
Ryan - Omg, I so wanna slap him. but Ryder - yup, he's my new fav. I mean "I'm not interested" dang that had to be a good line!
13Ruby KartAw, we love you too. Although, it might be in the creepy way, JK JK JK JK lol
Yay! I loved how she told her off. haha, it was good. I could see it all happening. I bet Cassie's face hit the floor. And why would she dress like that if she had a BF, I mean, that just doesn't work.
Only 5 more chappies, aw. I loved this story, and I can't wait to find out who Zorro really is. Provided we are going to find that out still.
Ryan - Omg, I so wanna slap him. but Ryder - yup, he's my new fav. I mean "I'm not interested" dang that had to be a good line!
6/4/2009 c19 47oNjA
That was hilarious! I can totally picture them running around the mall in tutus and tiaras...such a hysterical image! That was totally awesome that she was able to tell off Miss I'm-to-cool-to-really-care-that-I'm-a-skank! Fantastical work!
You can't be serious that this is almost over...NO! How am I supposed to work with a smile today if I know this story is almost over? The HORROR!
But you know, Katie definetely has to get back at Miss B-I-T-C-H! I can totally imagine her putting nair in the chicks shampoo bottle, or dumping milk in her gas tank... too funny!
Anywho, can't friggin wait to read more! I totally love this story!
~bbyluv
47oNjAThat was hilarious! I can totally picture them running around the mall in tutus and tiaras...such a hysterical image! That was totally awesome that she was able to tell off Miss I'm-to-cool-to-really-care-that-I'm-a-skank! Fantastical work!
You can't be serious that this is almost over...NO! How am I supposed to work with a smile today if I know this story is almost over? The HORROR!
But you know, Katie definetely has to get back at Miss B-I-T-C-H! I can totally imagine her putting nair in the chicks shampoo bottle, or dumping milk in her gas tank... too funny!
Anywho, can't friggin wait to read more! I totally love this story!
~bbyluv
6/3/2009 c12 WritingWithChocolate
LMAO! Her SN made me laugh my scrawny Indian ass off...seriously...how do you THINK of this stuff? And I'm still hoping Ryan's the one...he sounds SUPER HOT! And he's so sweet! And funny...argh...I'm jealous of her now..._
LMAO! Her SN made me laugh my scrawny Indian ass off...seriously...how do you THINK of this stuff? And I'm still hoping Ryan's the one...he sounds SUPER HOT! And he's so sweet! And funny...argh...I'm jealous of her now..._
6/3/2009 c11 WritingWithChocolate
EW! A saliva-y kiss...gros. I haven't had my first kiss yet, but I would HATE for it to be full of saliva *shudder*. Poor afro dude...I still keep hoping it was Ryan. Is that possible? I'm gonna wish on a star tonight...and wish it's Ryan...hehe
EW! A saliva-y kiss...gros. I haven't had my first kiss yet, but I would HATE for it to be full of saliva *shudder*. Poor afro dude...I still keep hoping it was Ryan. Is that possible? I'm gonna wish on a star tonight...and wish it's Ryan...hehe
6/3/2009 c10 WritingWithChocolate
First of all, sorry I haven't reviewed for sometime...damn school kept getting in the way, but I'm making time for you. Feel lucky..XD. Anyways AW! Ryan's so adorable! So's Alec! And hm...the Ryan she once loved? She had a crush on him? Or is she talkin bout little brotherly love there? hm...
First of all, sorry I haven't reviewed for sometime...damn school kept getting in the way, but I'm making time for you. Feel lucky..XD. Anyways AW! Ryan's so adorable! So's Alec! And hm...the Ryan she once loved? She had a crush on him? Or is she talkin bout little brotherly love there? hm...
6/3/2009 c18 CrazyInAGoodWay
o no he didnt! o snap. wtf. omg. im in like TOTALL FRIGGEN SHOCK HERE. i suggest u post more before i give myself some MORE brain issues... omg i wont b able to think of like ANYTHING else exept that hes a butmunch. a big fat buttmunch. who sucks butt. HARD. ya. apparently im supposed 2 go a month without cussing... not working out so well but anyways. more. NOW
o no he didnt! o snap. wtf. omg. im in like TOTALL FRIGGEN SHOCK HERE. i suggest u post more before i give myself some MORE brain issues... omg i wont b able to think of like ANYTHING else exept that hes a butmunch. a big fat buttmunch. who sucks butt. HARD. ya. apparently im supposed 2 go a month without cussing... not working out so well but anyways. more. NOW
6/3/2009 c18 6Kit Yami
Ok I have officially stared at the page for half an hour waiting for it to become magically longer, but it didn't. I feel like crying now. Not cool man, that was an evil place to leave off, ne. Anywho, I've loved the story so far, totemo omoshiroi. That means very interesting. Yes I hate you at the moment, tell me what happens next! Anyways I don't think I've reviewed on your story before! GASP! Wait how's she getting home? Oh nevermind I'll probably find that out in the next chapter. I love the gay man in your story, Damien, I have fallen in love again! Nah he's just a bucket filled to the brim with fun. In most stories I read now a days the not main characters don't really have too much of a place in the story, but you show the relationships with everyone. Kudos for you. Now I will see how long I can make this review. Hm... oh when it first said four months later I thought oh no here we go again another author does a timeskip and it kills off the story, demo (but) you told us the readers what happend and made sure we understood everything. I would give you another kudos, but people only need one a day.. er review. SO good job. You have a tendency of taking the things others fail in and making it a success. For example the pregnant character normally that just pisses me off for some reason, but I don't mind it at all in your story. Katie is nuts. End of review.
~Kit Yami
6Kit YamiOk I have officially stared at the page for half an hour waiting for it to become magically longer, but it didn't. I feel like crying now. Not cool man, that was an evil place to leave off, ne. Anywho, I've loved the story so far, totemo omoshiroi. That means very interesting. Yes I hate you at the moment, tell me what happens next! Anyways I don't think I've reviewed on your story before! GASP! Wait how's she getting home? Oh nevermind I'll probably find that out in the next chapter. I love the gay man in your story, Damien, I have fallen in love again! Nah he's just a bucket filled to the brim with fun. In most stories I read now a days the not main characters don't really have too much of a place in the story, but you show the relationships with everyone. Kudos for you. Now I will see how long I can make this review. Hm... oh when it first said four months later I thought oh no here we go again another author does a timeskip and it kills off the story, demo (but) you told us the readers what happend and made sure we understood everything. I would give you another kudos, but people only need one a day.. er review. SO good job. You have a tendency of taking the things others fail in and making it a success. For example the pregnant character normally that just pisses me off for some reason, but I don't mind it at all in your story. Katie is nuts. End of review.
~Kit Yami
6/3/2009 c18 13Ruby Kart
NO! AGH, you had to do that. Mess everything up for Katie, after it was all fixed together. lol.
Okay, so I know my other comments give you a big head, and I need to tone them down apparently, lol.
Who am I kidding, I love this story!
So this other guy, Ryder, haha, he made me smile. His character is the goofy one. But I can easily see him helping Katie out if she needed it. Especially if it involves making Ryan jealous.
This new girl, she better back up, there's no way she's getting Ryan, right? Oh well, I'm the reader, you're the writer. I'm at your mercy.
Loving it still. Update soon :)
13Ruby KartNO! AGH, you had to do that. Mess everything up for Katie, after it was all fixed together. lol.
Okay, so I know my other comments give you a big head, and I need to tone them down apparently, lol.
Who am I kidding, I love this story!
So this other guy, Ryder, haha, he made me smile. His character is the goofy one. But I can easily see him helping Katie out if she needed it. Especially if it involves making Ryan jealous.
This new girl, she better back up, there's no way she's getting Ryan, right? Oh well, I'm the reader, you're the writer. I'm at your mercy.
Loving it still. Update soon :)
6/3/2009 c18 47oNjA
Hm...definetely got to say I'm excited about having the longest review! Yay, go me!
I was cracking up when Katie fell on her butt...so. funny! Her angsty pervy co-worker reminds me of a guy that used to work at the Kone last summer...he wasn't hot though, just seriously annoying because he thought he could fix everything... which he really couldn't.
What the heck is with the end of this chapter though? Ryan is so not allowed to be with anyone but our bumbling Katie Kane! Unless it's just a ploy of his because he's afraid of falling in love with his best friends sister... Like he's afraid to recognize his feelings becuase he doesn't want her to reject him... like he desperately wants to pull away from Katie becuase he's afraid that he cannot protect her, like by loving her he isn't following through on his promise to her bro to always be around to help her out... (I think I'm just over analysing everything...)
This was fantastical, despite the ending... Can't wait for more!
~bbyluv
47oNjAHm...definetely got to say I'm excited about having the longest review! Yay, go me!
I was cracking up when Katie fell on her butt...so. funny! Her angsty pervy co-worker reminds me of a guy that used to work at the Kone last summer...he wasn't hot though, just seriously annoying because he thought he could fix everything... which he really couldn't.
What the heck is with the end of this chapter though? Ryan is so not allowed to be with anyone but our bumbling Katie Kane! Unless it's just a ploy of his because he's afraid of falling in love with his best friends sister... Like he's afraid to recognize his feelings becuase he doesn't want her to reject him... like he desperately wants to pull away from Katie becuase he's afraid that he cannot protect her, like by loving her he isn't following through on his promise to her bro to always be around to help her out... (I think I'm just over analysing everything...)
This was fantastical, despite the ending... Can't wait for more!
~bbyluv
6/3/2009 c17 6EmmaWoodhouse88
That was funny! I am really enjoying your story so far, I ccan't wait for the next chapter! :D
6EmmaWoodhouse88That was funny! I am really enjoying your story so far, I ccan't wait for the next chapter! :D
6/2/2009 c17 13Ruby Kart
Harry? OMG that's too funny! I seriously almost peed myself, lol.
Vince the gangsta turkey, lol, Katie's crazy.
Aw, a pawprint for a necklace, that's so adorable. And Damien busy teasing Ryan, it doesn't get better than that. But i want Katie to get Ryan (b/c I cant have him lol), not Damien ;)
I love this, it's incredible. Update soon!
13Ruby KartHarry? OMG that's too funny! I seriously almost peed myself, lol.
Vince the gangsta turkey, lol, Katie's crazy.
Aw, a pawprint for a necklace, that's so adorable. And Damien busy teasing Ryan, it doesn't get better than that. But i want Katie to get Ryan (b/c I cant have him lol), not Damien ;)
I love this, it's incredible. Update soon!