7/14/2009 c1 612simpleplan13
Thanks for your review forever ago as part of the RM. I am so ehing on my alerts!

Before I even read the piece, the capitalization bothered me. Is that first line capitalized 'cause it's the title and part of the piece? Why do you capitalize flying, but not sings? It was odd.

Shouldn't it be sing since it's flowers? (Flowers sing; flower sings)

I like it though. I really like the word "arabesque." So often people use small words in haikus that was a nice touch. I also think the last line was a cute little personification.

4/18/2009 c1 6Kalista Jia
short and simple.

Even though it is just 3 lines, the poem is gorgoeus. I can picture it well.

*sigh... spring is back...yay*

Beautiful.