8/23/2009 c1 45deefective
I liked this because I could really relate. The feelings of the narrator were very raw yet poetic. Also, I liked the underlining a lot, it was dramatic but in a subtle way. Nicely done.
I liked this because I could really relate. The feelings of the narrator were very raw yet poetic. Also, I liked the underlining a lot, it was dramatic but in a subtle way. Nicely done.
8/23/2009 c1 32Shelley Anderson
You have style. I love this one too. I like the contradiction of brands and scarless. And I can really feel the desperation. It makes me think back on guys that I've obsessed over.
You have style. I love this one too. I like the contradiction of brands and scarless. And I can really feel the desperation. It makes me think back on guys that I've obsessed over.
4/8/2009 c1 8black.magic89
This is very deep, I actually read it three or four times. For a moment it brought me back to a place in my life I don't like to think about. As I mentioned before your visuals are wonderful. I love to write, but I can not do it in such a creative and descriptive manor as you. You have a gift!
This is very deep, I actually read it three or four times. For a moment it brought me back to a place in my life I don't like to think about. As I mentioned before your visuals are wonderful. I love to write, but I can not do it in such a creative and descriptive manor as you. You have a gift!