
4/8/2009 c1
5ShippoCY88
Wow! Nice poem, I would say, even though I'm not well versed with poems. You managed to bring out the feelings of fear and danger very well, so keep it up! =)

Wow! Nice poem, I would say, even though I'm not well versed with poems. You managed to bring out the feelings of fear and danger very well, so keep it up! =)