for A Man Called Ranger Travis4/26/2021 c1 lukewarm285
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I really love your story, it deserves a lot of audience. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
1/28/2016 c2 Guest
Hello Sassa.
I wanted to tell you I enjoyed your buildup of the story it was intriguing an I think it was well written. I was excited to read more but I guess you haven't updated in a while.
Anyway thanks for posting your work. God bless
Hello Sassa.
I wanted to tell you I enjoyed your buildup of the story it was intriguing an I think it was well written. I was excited to read more but I guess you haven't updated in a while.
Anyway thanks for posting your work. God bless
1/13/2013 c2 
2Lady Marian
It's good, I would like to read more. Just a little critique though: more detail could be added to make the chapters longer.
2Lady MarianIt's good, I would like to read more. Just a little critique though: more detail could be added to make the chapters longer.
1/12/2013 c1 Lady Marian
Good start, but I agree with another reviewer: it could have been added to. More background as to how Chitsa came to live with Kuruk and Angeni. Also, the setting is confusing a bit: says she woke up in a wigwam, but the enemy is Texas Rangers... So they live in the West? What tribe is she living with? Wigwams were lived in by woodlands Indians and the plains Indians lived in tipis.
Good start, but I agree with another reviewer: it could have been added to. More background as to how Chitsa came to live with Kuruk and Angeni. Also, the setting is confusing a bit: says she woke up in a wigwam, but the enemy is Texas Rangers... So they live in the West? What tribe is she living with? Wigwams were lived in by woodlands Indians and the plains Indians lived in tipis.
10/22/2010 c2 6IntoxicatedCirculation-xo
I really like this story. It's very well written and is paced just right. I want to know more about how she came to be with the Native Americans and I want to know why he hates them so much. Did they kill the girl he wanted to marry?
6IntoxicatedCirculation-xoI really like this story. It's very well written and is paced just right. I want to know more about how she came to be with the Native Americans and I want to know why he hates them so much. Did they kill the girl he wanted to marry?
3/23/2010 c2 a99515
Awesome I like it, well written, one of the best on site. If your writting stays at this level through out this and other storys then you'r Master story writter. Thank you for writting it.
Awesome I like it, well written, one of the best on site. If your writting stays at this level through out this and other storys then you'r Master story writter. Thank you for writting it.
7/27/2009 c2 8juddlegirl
I can't wait to see what happens. Its a tad on the short side, but I know hoow hard it is to make them long.
8juddlegirlI can't wait to see what happens. Its a tad on the short side, but I know hoow hard it is to make them long.
5/22/2009 c2 10Jerusalem2045
Good start, your writing is very descriptive and some of the best that i've read here on Fiction Press. I look forward to the rest of the story!
10Jerusalem2045Good start, your writing is very descriptive and some of the best that i've read here on Fiction Press. I look forward to the rest of the story!
5/21/2009 c1 Ipaintwithwords
Nicely written, very nicely written.
I am curious as to who Chitsa is going to meet. I hope you continue soon
Cheers
Nicely written, very nicely written.
I am curious as to who Chitsa is going to meet. I hope you continue soon
Cheers
5/5/2009 c1 5eaststar
This really captures my interest. But, you could put a little more detail on how Angeni, her Indian mother found her. It seems as if it is an important point left out. Please write more soon!
5eaststarThis really captures my interest. But, you could put a little more detail on how Angeni, her Indian mother found her. It seems as if it is an important point left out. Please write more soon!
4/25/2009 c1 8Skyblueclouds
this is a cool story! i luv historicalish stories like this! keep writing bye bye:)
8Skybluecloudsthis is a cool story! i luv historicalish stories like this! keep writing bye bye:)